Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of 'Bad I away forget it', say 'But I always forget it'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Definitely not. I find it quite difficult to memorize things, especially small details. For example, my friends often borrow money from me, but I always forget until they remind me to pay them back.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on completing your sentences and using correct vocabulary. For example, 'something's important' should be 'something important', and 'on Tom' is unclear. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and add linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful because it was necessary for my school application. Fortunately, I managed to fix the problem later.

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should provide a complete and relevant answer. Saying '8' is unclear and does not answer the question. Try to give specific examples of things you need to remember daily.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like attending classes, completing homework, and meeting friends on time.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to speak clearly and use correct grammar. Instead of repeating words and unclear phrases, give a clear explanation. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: To remember important things, I usually write notes on my smartphone. This is convenient because I can check what I need to do today anytime.

× Bad I away forget it until they remind me to pay me back.

✓ Badly, I always forget it until they remind me to pay me back.

The adverb 'Bad' is incorrectly used; it should be 'Badly' to modify the verb 'forget'. Also, 'away' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'always'. The correct sentence uses the adverb 'Badly' and 'always' in proper order to express the meaning clearly.

× Bad I away forget it until they remind me to pay me back.

✓ Badly, I always forget it until they remind me to pay me back.

The pronoun 'I' is correct, but the sentence structure is awkward. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness by fixing adverb placement and word choice.

× I once forgot to submit an important school document on Tom, which was very stressful for me because it was.

✓ I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful for me because it was.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'Tom'; the correct phrase is 'on time' to indicate punctuality.

× Of course I have forgotten something's important before.

✓ Of course, I have forgotten something important before.

The phrase 'something's important' is incorrect; it should be 'something important'. The sentence structure is corrected by removing the possessive form and adding a comma after 'Of course' for clarity.

× For instant, I once forgot to submit an important school document on Tom, which was very stressful for me because it was.

✓ For instance, I once forgot to submit an important school document on time, which was very stressful for me because it was important for my school application.

The phrase 'For instant' is a misspelling of 'For instance'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'important for my school application' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× But fortunately.

✓ But fortunately, I was able to resolve the issue.

'But fortunately.' is a sentence fragment without a verb or complete thought. Adding a verb and completing the sentence makes it grammatically correct.

× 8.

✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life.

The response '8.' is not a complete sentence and lacks a verb. Providing a full sentence answers the question properly.

× Two remember important things I usually write down on the note on my smart phone because is.

✓ To remember important things, I usually write them down in the notes on my smartphone because it is helpful.

The pronoun 'Two' should be 'To'. 'Write down on the note' is incorrect; it should be 'write them down in the notes'. 'Because is' is incomplete; it should be 'because it is helpful'.

× Is Co informis when I want to know what I have to remember what what I should do today so I just I just use my phone so.

✓ It is convenient when I want to know what I have to remember and what I should do today, so I just use my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical words like 'Co informis'. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.