Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific examples with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when my friends borrow money from me, I often forget about it until they remind me to pay back.

제안: You should answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear pronouns.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten to submit an important document before. Luckily, my friends reminded me to submit it on time.

제안: Make sure your answer is clear and complete. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Explain what you need to remember with specific details. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

예시: As a university student, I need to remember my class schedule and assignment deadlines every day.

제안: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually remember important things by writing notes on my phone. For example, I write down my schedule and document deadlines to help me remember them.

× Like well there my friends borrow my money.

✓ Like, well, my friends borrow my money.

The word 'there' is incorrectly used here. It should be omitted to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I don't remember and they already told me that oh I borrowed your money so now I pay you back.

✓ I don't remember, and they already told me, 'Oh, I borrowed your money, so now I will pay you back.'

The sentence mixes present and past tenses improperly. 'Pay' should be in future tense 'will pay' to indicate intention. Also, punctuation and quotation marks improve clarity.

× Of course, I used to forget to submit their essential document an.

✓ Of course, I used to forget to submit an essential document.

The phrase 'their essential document an' is incorrect. 'An' should precede 'essential document' and 'their' is unnecessary here. The sentence is corrected for proper article use and clarity.

× And at that time my friends reminds me to submit the document.

✓ And at that time, my friends reminded me to submit the document.

The verb 'reminds' does not agree with plural subject 'friends'; it should be 'reminded' to match past tense and plural subject.

× Actually I'm a university student so will service is important for me? To remember it.

✓ Actually, I'm a university student, so will service be important for me to remember it?

The sentence structure is incorrect and confusing. Adding 'be' after 'will service' and removing the question mark clarifies the meaning. However, 'will service' is unclear; possibly 'will service' should be 'will service' or 'will service' is a mishearing. If 'will service' is intended as a noun phrase, it needs clarification.

× I can't remember my important things through the note in my phone.

✓ I can't remember my important things without the note on my phone.

The preposition 'through' is incorrectly used here. 'Without' or 'using' would be more appropriate depending on intended meaning. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct preposition for notes stored digitally.

× So when I have important things to remember like schedule or deadline of the document.

✓ So when I have important things to remember, like a schedule or a document deadline,

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper articles. Adding 'a' before 'schedule' and 'document deadline' and completing the sentence improves clarity.

× I have to write down it on my note.

✓ I have to write it down in my notes.

The phrase 'write down it' is incorrect; the correct order is 'write it down.' Also, 'on my note' should be 'in my notes' to refer to digital or physical notes.