Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

예시: No, I am not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget people's faces or their birthdays, even if they are my family or close friends.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整且含糊。建议练习完整句子表达，避免语法错误，并清晰表达观点。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten many important things in my life. For instance, once I forgot my friends' birthdays, which made me feel terrible because friendship is very important to me.

제안: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议组织语言，使用连词连接句子，并提供具体例子。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as my student ID number, the codes to open my home and store, and other important daily tasks.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达方法，并使用适当的连接词。

예시: Well, I usually make a schedule to remember important meetings. For example, I put the schedule on my phone or use apps to remind me of the meeting dates.

× It is hard for me to remember the people's face or their birthday number.

✓ It is hard for me to remember people's faces or their birthday numbers.

这里people是复数，face和birthday number也应该用复数形式faces和birthday numbers，表示多个人的脸和生日号码。

× Even. They are my family and friends.

✓ Even though they are my family and friends.

句子结构不完整，应该用连词even though引导让步状语从句，表示“即使他们是我的家人和朋友”。

× Yes, I have a good.

✓ Yes, I have.

这里的have后面不需要加a good，表达“我有过”，a good是不合适的。

× I have forgot a lot of things.

✓ I have forgotten a lot of things.

现在完成时中，forget的过去分词是forgotten，不是forgot。

× In my life.

✓ In my life,

这是一个不完整的句子，应该和后面的句子连起来，或者补充完整。

× At once I forgot my friends birthdays.

✓ Once I forgot my friends' birthdays.

once表示“一次”，不需要加at，friends的所有格应为friends'，表示朋友们的生日。

× I think is very terrible for me because.

✓ I think it is very terrible for me because

缺少主语it，导致句子不完整。

× Uh, because. The relationship.

✓ Uh, because the relationship

句子不完整，because后面应接完整的从句。

× Who is it? Friend is very close and I feel very.

✓ My friends are very close and I feel very bad.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且feel后应有形容词补语。

× Yeah, there are lots of information I have to notice a memory in my daily life.

✓ Yeah, there is a lot of information I have to remember in my daily life.

information是不可数名词，不能用复数形式lots of，且notice a memory表达不正确，应改为remember。

× For example, their student ID number.

✓ For example, their student ID numbers.

前文提到多条信息，student ID number应为复数形式numbers。

× All the number to open my home store.

✓ All the numbers to open my home and store.

number应为复数numbers，且home和store应分开。

× End. Take care too. The daily of the.

✓ And take care of daily things too.

句子不完整且表达混乱，应改为完整表达。

× Well, I usually take schedule 2.

✓ Well, I usually make a schedule.

take schedule表达不正确，应该用make a schedule表示制定计划。

× Two remember important meeting.

✓ to remember important meetings.

two是数字，应该用不定式to，meeting应为复数meetings。

× For example, I will put the schedule in my phone and.

✓ For example, I will put the schedule in my phone.

句子末尾多余的and导致句子不完整。

× Or using the times a apps too.

✓ Or use time apps too.

or后面应接动词原形use，times a apps表达不正确，应为time apps。

× To remember the meeting date.

✓ to remember the meeting date.

这是不完整的句子，应与前句连起来。