Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子冗长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things, especially theoretical concepts. Recently, I have been learning English for over a year, and I find it challenging to remember new vocabulary.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯，缺少清晰的主题句和逻辑连接词。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Although I don't have a very good memory, I always try to focus on important tasks. This helps me avoid forgetting things that could affect my daily life significantly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，明确说明需要记住的具体事项，并保持句子简洁。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to check and respond to all emails after 9:00 AM because my work schedule is very busy.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，且句子不完整。建议清晰表达记忆方法，使用正确的词汇和句式，并避免重复。

예시: To remember important things, I usually take notes in my notebook. I believe that good notes are more reliable than just relying on memory.

× No, I don't think I have a good memorize memorize especially in the specific theory fields as recently I've learning English for over.

✓ No, I don't think I have a good memory, especially in specific theoretical fields as recently I've been learning English for over.

memorize 是动词，应该用名词 memory；theory fields 应为复数形式 theoretical fields；句中缺少动词时态，应该用现在完成进行时 I've been learning。

× as recently I've learning English for over.

✓ as recently I've been learning English for over.

动词 learn 需要用现在完成进行时态，表示从过去持续到现在的动作，正确形式是 have been learning。

× I'm struggled with the vocabulary and I need to memorize men.

✓ I'm struggling with the vocabulary and I need to memorize many.

struggled 是过去式，句中应使用现在进行时 struggling 来表达正在进行的状态；men 是复数名词，语境应为 many（许多）。

× Even I don't have, uh, although I don't have a good memory, but I will focus on the things I need to, I need to do, especially the important things.

✓ Even though I don't have a good memory, I will focus on the things I need to do, especially the important things.

even 和 although 不应同时使用，且 but 与 although 连用冗余，应使用 even though 引导让步状语从句。

× I think that's very have huge influence in my daily life.

✓ I think that has a huge influence on my daily life.

very have 结构错误，应使用 has；huge influence 前需要冠词 a；in 应改为 on，表示影响作用。

× So I will pay almost, almost. Off my attention to it.

✓ So I will pay almost all of my attention to it.

almost 应修饰 all，且 off my attention 是错误搭配，应为 pay attention to。

× As I mentioned, I have working for over 10 years, so there's a manning hectic schedule for my daily routine.

✓ As I mentioned, I have been working for over 10 years, so there's a very hectic schedule for my daily routine.

have working 应为现在完成进行时 have been working；manning 是错误单词，应为 very 来修饰 hectic。

× especially after I come to work at before after 9:00 AM, I need to respond every emails from my box.

✓ especially after I come to work before 9:00 AM, I need to respond to every email in my inbox.

at before after 9:00 AM 结构混乱，应简化为 before 9:00 AM；respond 后应加介词 to；emails 应为单数 email；from my box 应为 in my inbox。

× So maybe something I need to enter ties entertai.

✓ So maybe there are some things I need to enter or entertain.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且单词拼写错误，应补充完整句子。

× For reporting things, I will take note in my bullet and I think that's a good way to.

✓ For reporting things, I will take notes in my bullet journal and I think that's a good way to remember.

take note 应为 take notes；bullet 应为 bullet journal；句尾不完整，应补充完整。

× In that right now we always say a good memory is always less than good noted.

✓ Right now we always say a good memory is always less than good notes.

good noted 语法错误，应为 good notes；less than 用法不当，表达比较时应使用 less important than 或 similar 结构。

× So we always take taking knock it too for remembering.

✓ So we always take notes for remembering.

take taking knock it too 语法错误，应为 take notes；too 用法错误，应去掉。