Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达温度的极端变化。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay comfortable during the extremely hot summers and very cold winters.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确表达机器带来的便利。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make housework easier and save us time to focus on studying or working.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的表达方式，并补充完整句子。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to use it correctly and safely.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并清楚表达说明书的重要性。

예시: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because machines can be complicated, and instructions help us assemble and use them properly.

× Um, I think it is the air conditioner because the result acquisition I couldn't bear the extreme higher temperature in summer or extreme cold temperature cold in winter.

✓ Um, I think it is the air conditioner because I couldn't bear the extremely high temperature in summer or extremely cold temperature in winter.

句中使用了错误的词汇和结构，'result acquisition'无意义，应删除；'extreme higher temperature'应改为'extremely high temperature'，因为'higher'是比较级，前面没有比较对象，且应使用副词修饰形容词。

× So I think it is the air conditioner that my, my room is more comfortable and.

✓ So I think it is the air conditioner that makes my room more comfortable.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清晰。应补充谓语'makes'，使句子完整。

× Uh, yes, especially it makes our house work nonsense, difficult and hardworking.

✓ Uh, yes, especially it makes our housework less nonsense, less difficult, and less hard.

'house work'应合并为'housework'表示家务；'nonsense'用法不当，表达不清晰，应改为'less nonsense'或更合适的词；'hardworking'是形容人，描述工作应使用'hard'。

× I think machines and washing machines makes our house work the more convenient and we have more time for ourselves.

✓ I think machines and washing machines make our housework more convenient and we have more time for ourselves.

主语是复数'machines and washing machines'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'make'，而不是单数'makes'。

× Especially learning and working.

✓ Especially for learning and working.

此处缺少介词'for'，使表达更完整，表示'特别是为了学习和工作'。

× Uh, yes, definitely. I think reading the instructions before using a machine is very important and necessary because it can get us how to use this machine properly and it helps us to keep a very safety condition.

✓ Uh, yes, definitely. I think reading the instructions before using a machine is very important and necessary because it can teach us how to use this machine properly and it helps us to maintain a very safe condition.

'get us how to use'表达错误，应改为'teach us how to use'；'keep a very safety condition'中'safety'应为形容词'safe'，且'keep'改为'maintain'更合适。

× Overall, I think it's very necessary and.

✓ Overall, I think it's very necessary.

句子末尾不完整，缺少内容，应去掉多余的'and'使句子完整。

× Yeah, definitely. I think it's very important and necessary to read the instructions because the machine may be specific and we are unfamiliar with this machine for the first time.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I think it's very important and necessary to read the instructions because the machine may be special and we are unfamiliar with this machine the first time we use it.

'specific'用法不当，应改为'special'或更合适的词；'for the first time'位置不当，改为'the first time we use it'更自然。

× So the instructions can get us to build these machines and tell us how to use.

✓ So the instructions can help us assemble these machines and tell us how to use them.

'get us to build'表达不自然，应改为'help us assemble'；'these machines'应与前文一致，且'tell us how to use'后应加宾语'them'。