Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I would like to stay air conditioners”不符合英语表达习惯，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子完整性和时态的正确使用。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner, especially during the hot and humid summers in Fuzhou. I usually turn it on to keep my room cool, which makes living here much more comfortable.

제안: 回答内容较为简单，且存在语法错误，如“allows”应与复数主语“they”一致。建议丰富内容，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意主谓一致。

예시: Definitely yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern society because they free people from heavy housework. As a result, people can save time and enjoy their leisure activities more.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，存在词汇使用错误，如“delicate graduate”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构应更清晰。

예시: It depends on the machine. For delicate or electronic devices, I usually read the instructions carefully before using them to avoid any damage.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“the person who is not familiar”应为“people who are not familiar”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构的完整性。

예시: Definitely yes, especially for people who are not familiar with the machines. It is quite necessary for them to read the instructions to use the machines properly and safely.

× I would like to stay air conditioners especially in summer in Fuzhou.

✓ I would like to stay with air conditioners especially in summer in Fuzhou.

句中缺少介词“with”，导致表达不完整。这里“air conditioners”是复数，符合语境。

× I would like to stay air conditioners especially in summer in Fuzhou.

✓ I would like to stay with air conditioners especially in summer in Fuzhou.

动词“stay”后应接介词“with”，表示“使用”或“待在……旁边”。

× The summer it is really hot and wet so I need to switch on my air conditioner and keep my room cool which helps me live more comfortable.

✓ In summer, it is really hot and wet, so I need to switch on my air conditioner and keep my room cool, which helps me live more comfortably.

句子结构不清晰，缺少逗号分隔，且“more comfortable”应为副词“more comfortably”修饰动词“live”。

× It allows people to free their hands from some heavy housework, make them save more time to enjoy their leisure time.

✓ They allow people to free their hands from heavy housework and save more time to enjoy their leisure time.

“some heavy housework”不自然，且主语应与前文“they”一致，动词形式需调整。

× It allows people to free their hands from some heavy housework, make them save more time to enjoy their leisure time.

✓ They allow people to free their hands from heavy housework and make them save more time to enjoy their leisure time.

主语“they”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“allow”，且两个动词应并列。

× It depends when it comes to the delicate graduate or just electronic machine.

✓ It depends when it comes to delicate gadgets or just electronic machines.

“delicate graduate”用词错误，应为“delicate gadgets”；“electronic machine”应为复数“electronic machines”。

× It depends when it comes to the delicate graduate or just electronic machine.

✓ It depends when it comes to delicate gadgets or just electronic machines.

“graduate”应为“gadgets”，且“machine”应为复数“machines”，以符合语境。

× Especially the person who is not familiar with those machines.

✓ Especially for people who are not familiar with those machines.

“the person”应改为复数“people”，且前面应加介词“for”使表达完整。

× Especially the person who is not familiar with those machines.

✓ Especially for the person who is not familiar with those machines.

“Especially”后应加介词“for”引出特定对象。