Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點重複且不夠精確，例如你提到洗衣機但卻說不喜歡洗碗，這讓人有點混淆。建議你直接說明為什麼喜歡洗衣機，並避免重複用詞。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I use it every day to clean my clothes, which makes my life much easier.

제안: 你的回答中斷了，且語句不夠流暢。建議你完整表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because in modern life, people are often busy and don't have enough time to do household chores manually. Therefore, these machines help us save time and maintain a clean home.

제안: 你的回答基本清楚，但語法有些錯誤，且句子結構可以更自然。建議注意動詞時態和句子流暢度。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to ensure I use it correctly. For example, when I bought a new washing machine, I carefully followed the steps in the manual to avoid any mistakes.

제안: 你的回答不完整且語句不流暢。建議你完整表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更自然。

예시: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use machines properly. This way, we can avoid mistakes and feel more confident when operating them.

× So I think the washing machine in our house help me a lot and I can use it in every every day and I don't have to wash my dishes anymore.

✓ So I think the washing machine in our house helps me a lot and I can use it every day and I don't have to wash my dishes anymore.

The subject 'washing machine' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'every every day' is redundant; it should be 'every day'.

× I can use it in every every day and I don't have to wash my dishes anymore.

✓ I can use it every day and I don't have to wash my dishes anymore.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'every day'. The correct phrase is simply 'every day'.

× So people need to use these machines to do the household. So I.

✓ So people need to use these machines to do the household chores.

The phrase 'do the household' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'do the household chores' to correctly express the intended meaning. Also, the sentence fragment 'So I.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed.

× The last time I use my new washing machine for my clothes, I read the instructions and to check every steps are correct and standard.

✓ The last time I used my new washing machine for my clothes, I read the instructions and checked that every step was correct and standard.

The past tense 'used' should be used instead of 'use' to match the past time reference. Also, 'to check every steps are correct and standard' is incorrect; it should be 'checked that every step was correct and standard' to maintain past tense and subject-verb agreement.

× and to check every steps are correct and standard.

✓ and checked that every step was correct and standard.

The word 'steps' is plural, so 'every' should be followed by a singular noun 'step'. Also, the verb agreement should be singular 'was' to match 'step'.

× before reading the instructions we don't know how to use it correctly.

✓ before reading the instructions, we don't know how to use them correctly.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'instructions', which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase.

× And if you read it, you can now understand the steps to correct using it and you will be confident and can.

✓ And if you read them, you can understand the steps to use it correctly and you will be confident.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' when referring to 'instructions'. The phrase 'to correct using it' is incorrect; it should be 'to use it correctly'. The sentence ending 'and you will be confident and can' is incomplete and should be simplified.