Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I use it all the day for work and study and it is important for me to keep it clean and within reach because I heavily rely on it,' you can say 'I use it all day for work and study, so I keep it clean and within reach as I rely on it heavily.'

예시: My favourite machine at home is my laptop. I use it all day for work and study, so I keep it clean and within reach as I rely on it heavily to complete tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid using vague words like 'sensational' and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, provide specific examples clearly. For instance, explain how washing machines save time compared to hand washing.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important for every household because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, washing clothes by hand daily is tiring, but a washing machine makes this task much easier and faster.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow. For example, instead of 'I do that which helps me avoid making mistakes and working it efficiently,' say 'this helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine efficiently.'

예시: Yes, I always read instructions before using any machine, whether small or big, because it is crucial to understand how it works. This helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine efficiently.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. For example, replace 'very crucial' with 'essential' and say 'prevent faults in the machine' instead of 'leads to fault in machine.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think it is essential to read instructions before using any machine because it helps prevent faults and ensures efficient operation.

× Yes, I believe a washing machine and vacuum cleaners are very sensational for every household because they save a lot of time and effort.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very sensational for every household because they save a lot of time and effort.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular 'a washing machine' with plural 'vacuum cleaners'. Both should be plural to maintain parallel structure and agreement when referring to general items in households.

× For example, washing clothes on daily basis at home by hand is very tiring and cleaning the vacuum clean the corporate vacuum can keep the.

✓ For example, washing clothes daily at home by hand is very tiring, and using a vacuum cleaner can help keep the place clean.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. It lacks proper structure and clarity. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence with proper subject and verb usage.

× Yes, I always prefer to read instructions before using any machine, no matter whether it is small or a big one, because it is very crucial to know how that machine works properly and I do that which helps me avoid making mistakes and working it efficiently.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to read instructions before using any machine, no matter whether it is small or big, because it is very crucial to know how that machine works properly, and doing so helps me avoid making mistakes and work efficiently.

The phrase 'I do that which helps me avoid making mistakes and working it efficiently' is awkward and incorrect. Replacing it with 'doing so helps me avoid making mistakes and work efficiently' corrects pronoun use and verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I think it is very crucial to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps to avoid any mistakes that can leads to fault in machine and it also helps to work efficiently with that machine or material.

✓ Yes, I think it is very crucial to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps to avoid any mistakes that can lead to faults in the machine, and it also helps to work efficiently with that machine or material.

The modal verb phrase 'can leads' is incorrect; 'can lead' is correct. Also, 'fault in machine' should be 'faults in the machine' for proper article use and pluralization.