Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达喜爱麦克风的原因，并补充具体细节。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the microphone because my family loves singing. We often use it together during our free time, which makes us very happy and brings us closer.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达观点并举具体例子。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort, especially when we are tired after work.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议简洁明了地说明阅读说明书的重要性，并避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they can be complicated and expensive, so it's important to know how to use them properly.

제안: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议简洁清晰地表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并举具体例子说明阅读说明书的重要性。

예시: Yes, I believe it's very important to read the instructions before using any machine, especially expensive or complex ones, to avoid damage or misuse.

× if you feel very tired one day when you finish your work to home, but you still have to washing the bowl and or sweeping the floors, you will feel very terrible and this.

✓ if you feel very tired one day when you finish your work and go home, but you still have to wash the bowl and/or sweep the floors, you will feel very terrible.

这里“have to”后面应该接动词原形，所以“washing”应改为“wash”。另外，“or”前后应加斜杠“/”表示选择。

× if you feel very tired one day when you finish your work to home, but you still have to washing the bowl and or sweeping the floors, you will feel very terrible and this.

✓ if you feel very tired one day when you finish your work and go home, but you still have to wash the bowl and/or sweep the floors, you will feel very terrible.

“finish your work to home”中“to”用法错误，应改为“and go home”表示完成工作后回家。

× machines sometimes are very complex and all of us must read the instructions to know how to use it, and many machines are very expensive.

✓ machines sometimes are very complex and all of us must read the instructions to know how to use them, and many machines are very expensive.

“instructions”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是“it”。

× If you don't read the instruction more clearly, I think I will expect.

✓ If you don't read the instructions carefully, I think I will be disappointed.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且“more clearly”用法不当，改为“carefully”更合适；“expect”用词错误，应为“be disappointed”表达预期的负面结果。

× I think we before we open something or using something, we should read the instructions.

✓ I think before we open or use something, we should read the instructions.

“before we open something or using something”中“using”应改为动词原形“use”，且“we”位置错误，应调整语序。

× I think we before we open something or using something, we should read the instructions.

✓ I think before we open or use something, we should read the instructions.

“or using”中“using”应改为动词原形“use”，因为前面是“open”，两个动作应保持一致的动词形式。

× if you buy very expensive and come complex machine, I think I think you should read the instruction to make sure you couldn't.

✓ if you buy a very expensive and quite complex machine, I think you should read the instructions to make sure you can use it properly.

“come”应为“quite”，表示程度；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“couldn't”用法错误，应表达“能正确使用”，改为“can use it properly”。

× if you buy very expensive and come complex machine, I think I think you should read the instruction to make sure you couldn't. Bad for her for each machine.

✓ if you buy a very expensive and quite complex machine, I think you should read the instructions to make sure you can use it properly. It's bad for each machine if you don't.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“couldn't”用法错误，应为“can use it properly”；“Bad for her for each machine”语义不清，改为“It's bad for each machine if you don't”更通顺。