Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
It must be the vacuum cleaner because I dislike sweep the floor by hand. It feels like a waste of time and energy. Having a vacuum cleaner makes cleaning more faster and easier so I can spend more time doing things I like.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yes, of course. I think they are both very significant because they can save people a lot of time and energy and can free up from those tiring housework, allowing us to do some things, import more important or uh, things we like. Overall, I think they make our life.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
In most cases I really don't like doing this because it often contains too many complex sentences which made those simple operations seem to be more complicated to understand. And besides, I have the confidence to use those machines more smoothly without those instructions.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
I think it's very important to read instructions, especially if you are not familiar with the machines, because I think instructions can help you use those new equipment more efficiently and more safely and can.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误，如“dislike sweep”应为“dislike sweeping”，“more faster”应为“faster”。同时，句子结构可以更自然流畅。
예시: My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because I dislike sweeping the floor by hand. It feels like a waste of time and energy. Using a vacuum cleaner makes cleaning faster and easier, so I can spend more time doing things I enjoy.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“import more important or uh, things we like”表达模糊。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免口语填充词。
예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and energy. They free us from tiring housework, allowing us to focus on more important tasks or hobbies. Overall, they improve our quality of life.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“made”应为“make”，且句子连接不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: In most cases, I don't like reading instructions because they often contain too many complex sentences, which make simple operations seem more complicated. Besides, I am confident that I can use these machines smoothly without reading the instructions.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答不完整，句子未结束，且“those new equipment”应为“that new equipment”。建议完整表达观点，注意单复数和句子完整性。
예시: I think it's very important to read instructions, especially if you are not familiar with the machines, because instructions can help you use new equipment more efficiently and safely.
문법
× I dislike sweep the floor by hand.
✓ I dislike sweeping the floor by hand.
动词dislike后面应接动名词形式，表示不喜欢做某事，故将sweep改为sweeping。
× Having a vacuum cleaner makes cleaning more faster and easier so I can spend more time doing things I like.
✓ Having a vacuum cleaner makes cleaning faster and easier so I can spend more time doing things I like.
more faster是错误的比较级用法，faster本身是比较级，不需要more修饰，应去掉more。
× can free up from those tiring housework, allowing us to do some things, import more important or uh, things we like.
✓ can free us from those tiring housework, allowing us to do some more important or, uh, things we like.
free up后面不直接接from，应使用free sb from结构，且important前缺少more修饰，且some things和important顺序错误。
× I have the confidence to use those machines more smoothly without those instructions.
✓ I have the confidence to use those machines more smoothly without instructions.
those instructions前面已提及，使用定冠词the更合适，或者直接去掉those，避免重复。
× instructions can help you use those new equipment more efficiently and more safely and can.
✓ instructions can help you use that new equipment more efficiently and more safely.
equipment是不可数名词，前面应使用that而非those，且句子末尾的and can不完整，应删除。
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