Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time by cleaning clothes efficiently, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，‘house calls’用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential for modern life because they save time, enabling people to concentrate on work or leisure activities.

제안: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句表达观点，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

예시: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. However, if I have trouble operating it or it breaks down, I will read the manual to understand how to fix it.

제안: 回答表达不连贯，逻辑不清晰。建议理清观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复。

예시: I don't think it's necessary to read the instructions if you already know how to use the machine. However, reading the manual is important when you are unfamiliar with the device.

× I think my favorite machine in my home is washing machine because washing machine allowed me not to not wash plates anymore after dinner or after lunch and.

✓ I think my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because the washing machine allows me not to wash plates anymore after dinner or lunch.

这里“washing machine”前缺少定冠词“the”，且“washing machine”应为单数形式，动词“allowed”应改为现在时“allows”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。句中有双重否定“not to not wash”，应改为“not to wash”。

× I think it is important for modern people because it can save time when people do house calls and allow people to do other things.

✓ I think it is important for modern people because it can save time when people do housework and allow people to do other things.

“house calls”应为“housework”，表示家务。这里不是情态动词错误，但词汇使用错误，属于词汇搭配问题，建议注意词汇准确性。

× I only reload instruction after I can use it properly or I broke it so I don't read the instruction before using a machine.

✓ I only read the instructions after I can use it properly or if I break it, so I don't read the instructions before using a machine.

“reload instruction”应为“read the instructions”，且“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”。“broke”应改为现在时“break”，保持时态一致。

× No, I don't think it's. It's important to read the instruction unless you can understand how to use the machine. The instruction is important by then.

✓ No, I don't think it's important to read the instructions unless you can understand how to use the machine. The instructions are important then.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，且“it's.”后多余句号应去掉。最后一句中“instruction is”应改为“instructions are”，主谓一致。