Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct vocabulary. For example, say "My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it is very useful and popular." Then add a supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes quickly. Moreover, it saves a lot of time compared to washing by hand.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Provide a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical mistakes.

예시: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they make household chores easier and faster. For example, using a washing machine saves time compared to washing clothes by hand.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because most machines are complicated. Therefore, reading the manual helps me use them safely and correctly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases. Provide a clear and concise response with relevant reasons and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because not following them can be dangerous. For instance, some machines have warnings to prevent accidents.

× I will. I think all the machine is very cardboard, very useful, but I think clothes machines are very good to use and it's very popular and it's very useful for us.

✓ I will. I think all the machines are very common, very useful, but I think clothes machines are very good to use and they're very popular and very useful for us.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'all'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to match the plural subject. 'Cardboard' seems to be a misuse; 'common' fits better in context. 'It's' should be 'they're' to refer to plural 'clothes machines'.

× Both of them are important, but I that's my opinion. It's not necessary because when you washing, when you sweeping with your hands.

✓ Both of them are important, but that's my opinion. It's not necessary because you can wash and sweep with your hands.

The phrase 'when you washing' and 'when you sweeping' is incorrect; it should be 'you can wash' and 'you can sweep' to express ability. Also, 'I that's my opinion' is incorrect; it should be 'that's my opinion'. The preposition 'because when you washing' is incorrect usage.

× I think it's very useful and necessary to read the instructions before using the machine, because all more most of the machines are complicated.

✓ I think it's very useful and necessary to read the instructions before using the machine, because most of the machines are complicated.

The phrase 'all more most of the machines' is redundant and incorrect. 'Most of the machines' is the correct quantifier to use here.

× Yes, as a matter of fact, it's very necessary and important and maybe if we don't have to eat, it's very dangerous and warning to people or us.

✓ Yes, as a matter of fact, it's very necessary and important, and maybe if we don't follow them, it's very dangerous and a warning to people or us.

The phrase 'if we don't have to eat' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to say 'if we don't follow them' (instructions). Also, 'warning' should be 'a warning' to be grammatically correct. The pronoun usage is unclear and needs correction.