Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Also, clarify your reasons with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I work in the kitchen and need to wash my uniform and fruits like apples every day. Therefore, it plays an important role in keeping my clothes and food clean.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

예시: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in daily life because they help maintain cleanliness and save time. Without them, it would be difficult to keep my home tidy and comfortable.

제안: Your answer is quite clear but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition.

예시: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to try it myself first, and only if I encounter difficulties do I refer to the manual.

제안: Try to give a more structured and clear response. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain your opinion with specific reasons.

예시: I think reading instructions is sometimes important, especially for new or complex machines. However, for familiar devices, I can usually operate them without any problems.

× I would say washing machine because I'm working at the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day so I the washing machine is most important machine for me.

✓ I would say the washing machine because I'm working in the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day, so the washing machine is the most important machine for me.

The phrase 'working at the kitchen' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for locations like rooms. Also, 'I the washing machine is most important machine' is missing articles and has word order issues. Adding 'the' before 'washing machine' and 'most important machine' is necessary. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I would say washing machine because I'm working at the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day so I the washing machine is most important machine for me.

✓ I would say the washing machine because I'm working in the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day, so the washing machine is the most important machine for me.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'the kitchen'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside a room or building. Using the correct preposition ensures the sentence sounds natural and grammatically correct in English (Australia).

× I would say washing machine because I'm working at the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day so I the washing machine is most important machine for me.

✓ I would say the washing machine because I'm working in the kitchen currently and I need to wash my uniform and apples every day, so the washing machine is the most important machine for me.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' and 'most important machine'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'the' specifies the particular machine being referred to, which is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I think both both machines are very important in our in my daily life. Without them, I cannot hardly continue my life. I because I like to be clean and tidy and.

✓ I think both machines are very important in my daily life. Without them, I can hardly continue my life because I like to be clean and tidy.

The phrase 'cannot hardly' is a double negative and incorrect; it should be 'can hardly'. Also, 'both both' is a repetition error. The phrase 'in our in my daily life' is redundant and confusing; 'in my daily life' is sufficient. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think both both machines are very important in our in my daily life. Without them, I cannot hardly continue my life. I because I like to be clean and tidy and.

✓ I think both machines are very important in my daily life. Without them, I can hardly continue my life because I like to be clean and tidy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and incomplete thoughts. Removing repetitions and combining fragments into complete sentences improves coherence and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't, but at first I try by myself without reading an instructions. Then if there's something I don't know, I don't understand, then this this is the time I would use the instructions of the machine.

✓ No, I don't, but at first I try by myself without reading instructions. Then if there's something I don't know or don't understand, that is the time I use the machine's instructions.

The phrase 'an instructions' is incorrect because 'instructions' is plural and does not take 'an'. Also, 'this this' is a repetition error. Using 'instructions' without an article is correct here. These corrections fix article misuse and improve sentence clarity.

× No, I don't, but at first I try by myself without reading an instructions. Then if there's something I don't know, I don't understand, then this this is the time I would use the instructions of the machine.

✓ No, I don't, but at first I try by myself without reading instructions. Then if there's something I don't know or don't understand, that is the time I use the machine's instructions.

The phrase 'this this is the time' is a repetition and awkward. Replacing it with 'that is the time' clarifies the reference. Also, 'the instructions of the machine' is better expressed as 'the machine's instructions' for natural English usage.

× For me, sometimes yes, but sometimes no. I would say without instructions. Basically I can use machines without no, no worries, no worries.

✓ For me, sometimes yes, but sometimes no. I would say I can basically use machines without instructions, no worries.

The phrase 'without no' is a double negative and incorrect; it should be 'without'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Combining the ideas into a clear sentence improves grammatical correctness and clarity.