Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“make laundries”应为“do the laundry”，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time doing the laundry. Moreover, it allows me to relax and focus on other tasks while the clothes are being cleaned.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“both of it”应为“both of them”，句子未完整表达，且缺少连接词和具体细节。建议完整表达观点并使用连接词。

예시: I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern life. They help maintain cleanliness with minimal effort and greatly improve the efficiency of household chores.

제안: 回答较好，但“read these instructions seriously”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions carefully, especially when using a new machine. This helps me operate the machine correctly and safely.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“this instructions”应为“these instructions”，“informations”应为“information”。建议注意单复数和不可数名词的正确使用，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Definitely, I think it is essential to read these instructions before using any machine. They provide important information on how to operate the machine properly, which helps avoid problems like damaging it.

× I say my favorite machine is washing machine.

✓ I say my favorite machine is the washing machine.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机，应该用定冠词。

× it saves me so much time to make laundries

✓ it saves me so much time doing the laundry

“laundries”用法不当，laundry通常作为不可数名词表示洗衣服的活动，应该用“doing the laundry”表达洗衣服这件事。

× it gave me a chance to get relaxed and get my work done.

✓ it gives me a chance to get relaxed and get my work done.

这里时态应与前文保持一致，描述现在的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时“gives”。

× I think both of it are very important in our modern lives.

✓ I think both of them are very important in our modern lives.

“both”后面应接复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× Sweeping machine is a great way to maintain cleaners without much effort, improve efficiency in household chores and I think it's.

✓ Sweeping machines are a great way to maintain cleanliness without much effort, improve efficiency in household chores, and I think so.

“Sweeping machine”应为复数形式“Sweeping machines”，且“cleaners”用词不当，应为“cleanliness”。句尾“and I think it's”不完整，改为“and I think so”。

× I think it is essential to read this instructions before using any machine.

✓ I think it is essential to read these instructions before using any machine.

“instructions”是复数，指示代词应为“these”而非“this”。

× Instructions provide many important informations on how to use the machine correctly so it can help to avoid unnecessary problems like damaging the machine.

✓ Instructions provide much important information on how to use the machine correctly so it can help to avoid unnecessary problems like damaging the machine.

“information”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“informations”，应使用“much information”。