Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些重复和语法错误。建议避免重复表达，使用更自然流畅的句子，并增加连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it provides a cool and comfortable environment during Beijing's hot summers, which greatly improves my daily life.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，使用正确的语法和词汇。

예시: I think washing and sweeping machines are useful, but since I don't have them, I usually do these chores myself, which is not too troublesome for me.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但语法和用词有误。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they teach me how to operate it correctly and explain its functions.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps me understand the machine's functions and even teaches me some basic repair skills.

× I can wash things and sweat things by myself and maybe use them are very bothering.

✓ I can wash things and sweep things by myself, and maybe using them is very bothersome.

这里'sweat'应为'sweep'，且'and maybe use them are very bothering'结构不正确，应该用动名词形式'using'，并且谓语动词应为单数'is'，形容词应为'bothersome'。建议改为'using them is very bothersome'。

× the instruments can teach me how to use it in a correct way and also told me what functions they have.

✓ the instructions can teach me how to use them in a correct way and also tell me what functions they have.

这里'instruments'应为'instructions'，且代词'it'应与复数'instructions'对应，改为'them'。动词时态应保持一致，'told'改为'tell'。

× It allows me to use it in a better way it can because it can told me what functions it have and has and give me some skills to repair it.

✓ It allows me to use it in a better way because it can tell me what functions it has and gives me some skills to repair it.

句子中'told'应为'tell'，'have'应为'has'，动词时态和主语一致。去掉多余的'it can'，并调整动词形式使句子通顺。