Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and expanding with more specific details. For example, use 'offers' instead of 'offer' and explain why the laptop is productive and entertaining. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the answer at the end.

예시: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because it helps me work efficiently and also provides entertainment through movies and games.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains hesitations. Try to organise your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct vocabulary such as 'sweeping' instead of 'swapping' and 'labour' instead of 'laborers'.

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and cleaning robots are very important because they save time and effort, especially for people who live alone like me.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct grammar such as 'instructions' plural and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions carefully, but since many machines are easy to use nowadays, I don't always need to study them in detail.

제안: Your answer has good points but needs clearer structure and grammar corrections. Use linking words to connect reasons and avoid repetition. For example, say 'electrical machines' instead of 'electronical' and 'instructions' plural.

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important for safety and to avoid costly mistakes, especially when using electrical machines.

× My favorite machine in my home would be my laptop because it's really productive and offer entertainment for me.

✓ My favorite machine in my home would be my laptop because it's really productive and offers entertainment for me.

The subject 'it' refers to 'my laptop', which is singular, so the verb should be 'offers' to agree in number. Using 'offer' is incorrect because it is the base form used with plural subjects or with 'I' and 'you'.

× But I remember I hadn't umm, cleaning robots, which really liberate me from doing, uh, swapping the floor and those repetitive, uh, laborers.

✓ But I remember I didn't have, umm, cleaning robots, which really liberate me from doing, uh, sweeping the floor and those repetitive, uh, labours.

The phrase 'I hadn't cleaning robots' is incorrect because 'hadn't' is a contraction of 'had not' and should be followed by a past participle or used in past perfect tense. Here, the correct form is 'didn't have' to indicate the past simple negative. Also, 'swapping' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'sweeping'. 'Laborers' is not appropriate here; 'labours' or 'tasks' would be better. The correction focuses on the past tense issue and verb choice.

× But I remember I hadn't umm, cleaning robots, which really liberate me from doing, uh, swapping the floor and those repetitive, uh, laborers.

✓ But I remember I didn't have, umm, cleaning robots, which really liberate me from doing, uh, sweeping the floor and those repetitive, uh, labours.

The phrase 'liberate me from doing, uh, swapping the floor' contains the incorrect verb 'swapping' instead of 'sweeping'. 'Swapping' means exchanging, which is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition 'from' is used properly here, but the verb choice is wrong. Correcting the verb improves the sentence's meaning.

× Yeah, I usually well go through the instruction from like go through very thoroughly, but not look at it like very look at details.

✓ Yeah, I usually go through the instructions very thoroughly, but I don't look at the details very closely.

The phrase 'go through the instruction from like go through very thoroughly' is awkward and contains unnecessary prepositions and filler words. The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here. The correction removes unnecessary prepositions and clarifies the meaning. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× Yeah, I usually well go through the instruction from like go through very thoroughly, but not look at it like very look at details.

✓ Yeah, I usually go through the instructions very thoroughly, but I don't look at the details very closely.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps. Similarly, 'details' is plural and should be matched with appropriate verbs and articles. Using singular form here is incorrect.

× Like nowadays those instructions are pretty self explained, so I don't really need to read a lot of it.

✓ Like nowadays those instructions are pretty self-explanatory, so I don't really need to read a lot of them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to 'instructions', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'self explained' should be 'self-explanatory' as it is an adjective describing 'instructions'.

× Yes, I think it is really important to read the instruction for safety and for operational costs because you need to especially dealing with some some machines that can are electronical.

✓ Yes, I think it is really important to read the instructions for safety and for operational costs because you need to especially deal with some machines that can be electrical.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. The phrase 'you need to especially dealing' is incorrect; it should be 'you need to especially deal'. The word 'electronical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'electrical'. The correction addresses quantifier use and verb form.

× It is really important to read them instructions.

✓ It is really important to read those instructions.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here; 'those' is the correct demonstrative adjective to modify 'instructions'. 'Them' is an object pronoun and cannot directly modify a noun.