Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“starting”应为“start”，“a couple of fresh coffee”表达不自然，且“fitable”应为“fits well”。建议注意动词时态和词汇搭配，避免语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: My coffee maker is my favorite machine at home. I start my day with a fresh cup of coffee, which is cheaper than buying it outside. It is small and fits well in my kitchen, and I always make coffee by myself.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer to using”应为“prefer to use”，且表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的动词形式，使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important to me. I don't like washing or sweeping at home, so I prefer to use machines instead of doing it by hand.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“not good at machine”应为“not good with machines”，“read the instrument”应为“read the instructions”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法基础，注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

예시: I always read the instructions before using a machine because I'm not good with machines like washing machines or sweeping machines, so I need to understand how to use them properly.

제안: 回答重复且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议避免重复，使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Definitely, it is very important to read the instructions before using new machines at home because I am not familiar with them.

× I starting my day with a couple of fresh coffee, which is cheaper than buying it outside.

✓ I start my day with a couple of fresh coffees, which is cheaper than buying it outside.

动词start后面应该用动词原形，不能用现在分词starting。

× I starting my day with a couple of fresh coffee, which is cheaper than buying it outside.

✓ I start my day with a couple of fresh coffees, which is cheaper than buying it outside.

coffee是不可数名词，但这里表示几杯咖啡，应该用复数coffees。

× It's small and fitable in my kitchen and I always make it to myself.

✓ It's small and suitable for my kitchen and I always make it myself.

fitable不是正确的形容词，应该用suitable。make it to myself表达不自然，应该用make it myself。

× I don't like washing or sweeping in at home, so rather than doing it by my hand, I prefer to using machines instead of me.

✓ I don't like washing or sweeping at home, so rather than doing it by hand, I prefer to use machines instead of doing it myself.

介词in at home错误，应该用at home。by my hand表达不自然，应该用by hand。prefer后面接动词原形use，而不是using。instead of me表达错误，应该用instead of doing it myself。

× I prefer to using machines instead of me.

✓ I prefer to use machines instead of doing it myself.

prefer后面接动词不定式to use，而不是动名词using。

× I must read the instrument before use it.

✓ I must read the instructions before using it.

instrument用错，应该是instructions。before后面接动名词using，而不是不带to的不定式use。

× I'm not good at machine such as washing machines or sweeping machines, so I must read the instrument before use it.

✓ I'm not good at machines such as washing machines or sweeping machines, so I must read the instructions before using them.

machine应为复数machines。instrument应为instructions。use it应改为using them，保持代词和前面复数machines一致。

× Definitely it is fairly important to read the instructions because the new machines in at home before you see, it is very important to read the instructions because I'm not familiar with it.

✓ Definitely, it is very important to read the instructions because the new machines at home, before you use them, and I am not familiar with them.

in at home错误，应该用at home。句子结构混乱，需调整。you see应改为you use。it应改为them，指代复数machines。