Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'it's help' nên là 'it helps'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lý do tại sao máy giặt là máy yêu thích, ví dụ như tiết kiệm thời gian hoặc giúp bạn thư giãn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly, especially when I am busy or tired. It saves me a lot of time and effort, allowing me to relax or focus on other tasks.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến sự nhất quán về số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'It is' nên là 'They are' khi nói về nhiều máy. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important, especially nowadays. They are convenient and save a lot of time, so I can focus on important tasks or simply relax after a busy day.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'I believe read the instructions' nên là 'I believe it is important to read the instructions'. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' và cố gắng nói trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is important to understand how to operate it properly and safely. This helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine more effectively.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'Help the manual, help me learn all his' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any device. For example, when I bought a computer, I read the manual carefully, which helped me understand all its functions and use it properly.

× While in my house, washing machine is my favorite machine because it's help me wash the dishes whenever I have a busy day or I'm too lazy to do it.

✓ While in my house, the washing machine is my favorite machine because it helps me wash the dishes whenever I have a busy day or I'm too lazy to do it.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' because it refers to a specific machine in the house. Also, 'it's help' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× While in my house, washing machine is my favorite machine because it's help me wash the dishes whenever I have a busy day or I'm too lazy to do it.

✓ While in my house, the washing machine is my favorite machine because it helps me wash the dishes whenever I have a busy day or I'm too lazy to do it.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Well, I think they are very important nowadays, especially on busy days when I don't have much time. It is very convenient and time saving so I can focus on important task or just relax.

✓ Well, I think they are very important nowadays, especially on busy days when I don't have much time. They are very convenient and time-saving so I can focus on important tasks or just relax.

The pronoun 'It' should be 'They' to agree with the plural subject 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective.

× Well, I believe read the instructions before using something. Especially machine is very important because they have to know how to use it and what uh what kind of machine is used for. Uh is very helpful and convenient for a user.

✓ Well, I believe reading the instructions before using something is important. Especially machines, it is very important because you have to know how to use it and what kind of machine it is used for. It is very helpful and convenient for a user.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'they' is incorrect when referring to 'machine' (singular), so 'you' or 'one' is better. Also, 'Especially machine is very important' is awkward; 'Especially machines, it is very important' or 'Especially for machines, it is very important' is clearer. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well, I believe read the instructions before using something. Especially machine is very important because they have to know how to use it and what uh what kind of machine is used for. Uh is very helpful and convenient for a user.

✓ Well, I believe reading the instructions before using something is important. Especially for machines, it is very important because you have to know how to use them and what kind of machine they are used for. It is very helpful and convenient for a user.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Adding 'reading' and restructuring the sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, pronouns are corrected to agree with plural 'machines'.

× It's very important to read instruction before using something because they have to understand how it works and what it is for. For example, when I bought the computer, I have to read the manual. Help the manual, help me learn all his.

✓ It's very important to read the instructions before using something because you have to understand how it works and what it is for. For example, when I bought the computer, I had to read the manual. The manual helped me learn everything.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. 'They' is replaced with 'you' for general statements. 'I have to' is changed to past tense 'I had to' to match the past event. 'Help the manual, help me learn all his' is unclear and corrected to 'The manual helped me learn everything' for clarity and correctness.