Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较长且有些重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because I love cooking. I usually store fresh ingredients and drinks in it to keep them fresh for my meals.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time for busy people. Therefore, these machines make our daily lives more convenient.

제안: 回答较自然，但句子结构稍显简单。建议增加连接词，使表达更连贯，同时丰富词汇。

예시: I don't often read instructions; instead, I like to explore the functions by pressing buttons myself. However, for complex machines, I always read the manual to avoid mistakes.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词连接观点。

예시: I think reading instructions is important for complex machines to use them correctly. However, for simple devices, I prefer to explore their functions myself to save time.

× I always purchase many ingredients and put them into the refrigerator when I open.

✓ I always purchase many ingredients and put them into the refrigerator when I open it.

句子中缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。应在"open"后加上宾语"it"，表示打开冰箱。

× in the temporary society, people may be there about their work or study.

✓ in today's society, people may be busy with their work or study.

"temporary society"用词不当，应为"today's society"表示现代社会；"be there about"是不正确的搭配，应改为"be busy with"表示忙于。

× Actually not very often.

✓ Actually, not very often.

句首缺少主语，导致句子不完整。应加逗号分隔，表达"实际上不太经常"。

× I always explore the functions by pushing the buttons or touching the instrument by myself.

✓ I always explore the functions by pushing the buttons or touching the controls by myself.

"instrument"用词不当，机器上的控制部件应称为"controls"，更符合语境。

× But if some is a machine, I think reading the instructions may waste our time.

✓ But if it is a simple machine, I think reading the instructions may waste our time.

"some is a machine"结构错误，应改为"it is a simple machine"，使句子完整且语义明确。