Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够正式，如“100%”和“daily life saver”较口语化。建议使用更正式且多样的表达方式，并适当扩展细节。

예시: My favourite machine at home is definitely my hair dryer. Without it, my hair becomes very messy and unmanageable in the morning. It helps me save a lot of time during my daily routine, making it an essential appliance for me.

제안: 回答内容表达了观点，但语法和用词存在错误，如“with them”应改为“because of them”，“break”应为“rest”。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me from doing all the dirty chores myself. After a long day, I just want to rest and relax, so these machines help me a lot.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“a field of buttons”应为“a few buttons”，“that instructions”应为“the instructions”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

예시: Usually, I don't read the instructions unless the machine seems complicated. Most of the time, I try to figure it out by pressing a few buttons first. If that doesn't work, then I check the instructions.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子不够连贯，且存在语法错误，如“Tiny font where the diagram”不完整。建议使用完整句子并加强句子之间的连接。

예시: I believe it is important to read the instructions, but sometimes the manuals are difficult to understand because of tiny fonts and unclear diagrams. Therefore, I usually try to figure out how to use the machine by pressing a few buttons first. If that doesn't work, I look for help on the Internet.

× Definitely important with them, I don't need to do all The Dirty stuff by myself, especially after a long day, I just need to break and relax so they really helped me a lot.

✓ Definitely important. With them, I don't need to do all the dirty stuff by myself, especially after a long day. I just need to break and relax, so they really help me a lot.

这里的“helped”时态不对，前文是现在时态，应该用现在时态“help”。另外，“The Dirty”中的“The”不应该大写，且“dirty”不应大写。句子中缺少逗号分隔，导致句子结构不清晰。

× Definitely important with them, I don't need to do all The Dirty stuff by myself, especially after a long day, I just need to break and relax so they really helped me a lot.

✓ Definitely important. With them, I don't need to do all the dirty stuff by myself, especially after a long day. I just need to take a break and relax, so they really help me a lot.

“break”应为名词短语“take a break”，表示“休息”，而不是动词“break”。

× If that doesn't work then I will go back to check that instructions.

✓ If that doesn't work, then I will go back to check the instructions.

“instructions”是复数名词，前面应使用定冠词“the”而不是指示代词“that”。

× Tiny font where the diagram.

✓ Tiny font with the diagram.

这里“where”用法错误，应使用介词“with”表示“带有图示的细小字体”。

× If it doesn't work then I will check on the Internet.

✓ If it doesn't work, then I will check the Internet.

“check on the Internet”中的“on”多余，正确表达是“check the Internet”，表示“查找互联网信息”。