Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine with a drying function. Since it rains a lot in my hometown, especially in summer, this machine helps me dry my clothes quickly and conveniently.

제안: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如'read'应为'reach'），句子表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. They can reach corners that are hard to clean by hand. Moreover, many young people are busy, so these machines save a lot of time and effort.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不够准确的地方。建议注意冠词使用和句子流畅性。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because most basic machines are user-friendly. I prefer to try the buttons myself to learn how they work.

제안: 回答中有口语填充词较多，句子结构不够紧凑。建议减少口语填充词，使用更简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: It depends on the situation. For simple machines, reading instructions is not always necessary. However, for complicated machines, especially when using them for the first time, reading the instructions is important.

× I believe it is the washing machine which function that can dry clothes because in my hometown it rains very frequently especially during summers.

✓ I believe it is the washing machine whose function can dry clothes because in my hometown it rains very frequently especially during summers.

这里使用了关系代词错误，应该用"whose"来表示“洗衣机的功能”，而不是"which function that"。这是关系代词的正确用法。

× So I can't live without a washing machine because all my clothes can be very wet with no help or feed dry function.

✓ So I can't live without a washing machine because all my clothes can be very wet without help or a drying function.

这里"with no help or feed dry function"表达不正确，应该用"without help or a drying function"，表示“没有帮助或烘干功能”。"feed dry function"是错误搭配。

× Yes, because those machines, especially within machines, can read some corners in your house that you cannot read with your hands.

✓ Yes, because those machines, especially vacuum machines, can reach some corners in your house that you cannot reach with your hands.

"within machines"用词错误，应该是"vacuum machines"（吸尘器）。另外，"read some corners"应为"reach some corners"，表示“到达某些角落”。这里是词汇使用错误。

× No, because nowadays the those basic machines are designed very user friendly as you can clearly see the basic functions through the bottom or the screen.

✓ No, because nowadays those basic machines are designed to be very user friendly as you can clearly see the basic functions on the buttons or the screen.

"the those"重复使用定冠词错误，应去掉"the"。"through the bottom"应为"on the buttons"，表示“在按钮上”。这里是冠词和介词使用错误。

× So I'd rather try it by clicking all the buttons by myself.

✓ So I'd rather try it by clicking all the buttons myself.

"by myself"已经表达了“自己做”的意思，前面的"by"重复，应该去掉一个"by"。这里是连词和介词使用冗余。

× Umm, it depends on the situation. Uh, if you're trying to use some basic functions of some simple machines, they don't have to read the full instructions, but you're trying to use some complicated machines, especially for the first time, it will be very necessary.

✓ Umm, it depends on the situation. Uh, if you're trying to use some basic functions of simple machines, you don't have to read the full instructions, but if you're trying to use some complicated machines, especially for the first time, it will be very necessary.

句子中缺少连词"if"，导致句子结构不完整。应该在第二个条件句前加上"if"，使句子结构完整。这里是连词使用错误。