Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'wake my wake up and' 부분은 의미 전달이 불명확하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 추가적인 세부 설명이 부족하여 답변이 다소 단조롭게 느껴집니다.

예시: My favorite machine at home is definitely the coffee machine. I use it every morning to help me wake up and start my day energized.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 길어 이해하기 어렵습니다. 'my these machines we can get rid of are tired' 부분은 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 문장을 명확하게 나누고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They help us save time and energy because washing dishes and sweeping every day can be very tiring.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 'I really got scared easily' 부분은 자연스럽지 않습니다. 더 자연스러운 표현과 연결어를 사용하여 문장을 부드럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am worried that I might break it if I don't. Therefore, I make sure to understand how to use it properly.

제안: 답변이 비교적 잘 구성되어 있으나, 'in the instructions it tells us that what is dangerous' 부분은 어색합니다. 더 자연스러운 문장 구조와 다양한 어휘를 사용하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because they explain the potential dangers and precautions we need to take when using the machine.

× I use a coffee machine every morning to wake my wake up and.

✓ I use a coffee machine every morning to wake up.

The phrase 'to wake my wake up and' is incorrect. The verb 'wake' should be followed by 'up' as a phrasal verb without repeating 'wake'. The correct form is 'to wake up'. This is a verb + -ing form issue because 'wake up' is a phrasal verb and should be used correctly.

× Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important because it is an exhausting thing to wash the dishes or sweep every day so my these machines we can get rid of are tired.

✓ Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important because it is exhausting to wash the dishes or sweep every day, so with these machines, we can get rid of the tiredness.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage such as 'my these machines' which is ungrammatical. Also, the phrase 'we can get rid of are tired' is incorrect. The correction replaces 'my these machines' with 'these machines' and clarifies the meaning by saying 'we can get rid of the tiredness'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns issue.

× I really got scared easily that the machine will be broken if I didn't read the instructions before.

✓ I really get scared easily that the machine will be broken if I don't read the instructions before.

The sentence mixes past tense 'got scared' with future conditional 'will be broken' and past conditional 'didn't read'. To maintain consistency and express a general habit, present tense should be used: 'get scared', 'will be broken', and 'don't read'. This is a past tense issue because the tense does not match the intended meaning.