Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas such as 'quick and fast'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the microwave because it is very convenient. For example, it heats food quickly and can be used anytime without much cleaning.

제안: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice, for example, 'sweeping machines' instead of 'swimming machines'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For instance, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines help keep the house tidy with less effort.

제안: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, such as 'it will break' instead of 'it will broke'. Also, try to expand your answer with linking words and more specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because if I use it incorrectly, it might break. Therefore, reading instructions helps me use the machine properly and avoid damage.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use plural forms where appropriate, like 'instructions'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide clear examples.

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions carefully. For example, using a machine incorrectly can damage it or cause accidents. Therefore, reading instructions helps you understand how to use the machine safely and correctly.

× So I think every household need to have it in their house.

✓ So I think every household needs to have it in their house.

The subject 'every household' is singular, so the verb should be 'needs' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× if you use it wrong maybe it will broke something so you need to use it right.

✓ if you use it wrong maybe it will break something so you need to use it right.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Broke' is past tense; the correct form after 'will' is 'break'.

× Yes, I believe umm it is very important to read instruction carefully.

✓ Yes, I believe umm it is very important to read instructions carefully.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the guidelines or directions, as it is countable and usually used in plural form in this context.

× Therefore, reading instruction help you uh, help you understand how to use it correctly.

✓ Therefore, reading instructions helps you uh, help you understand how to use it correctly.

The subject 'reading instructions' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.