Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use clearer and more precise language. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, such as 'mission' instead of 'machine'. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I spend a lot of time watching it. For example, I enjoy watching movies and sports, especially cricket. Additionally, I often listen to music and watch videos on YouTube using the TV.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays. Since most adults in the household go to work, these machines save a lot of time and reduce physical effort, making daily chores easier.

제안: Focus on making your sentences concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it correctly. This prevents errors and damage, and also makes setting up and using the machine easier.

제안: Use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence flow by combining related ideas with linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical mistakes.

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps us use machines properly and avoid damage. Moreover, following the instructions can save a lot of time when setting up and operating the machine.

× My favorite mission I would say TV because most of the time I spend watching TV.

✓ My favorite machine, I would say, is the TV because most of the time I spend watching TV.

The word 'mission' is incorrect here; it should be 'machine' to match the question. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement, which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× Sometimes sports, mostly cricket I do watch.

✓ Sometimes I watch sports, mostly cricket.

The original sentence has an awkward word order and missing subject placement. The correction places the subject 'I' before the verb 'watch' for proper sentence structure and clarity.

× Apart from that I put songs and watch YouTube.

✓ Apart from that, I play songs and watch YouTube.

The verb 'put' is incorrect in this context; 'play' is the correct verb when referring to playing songs. Also, a comma after 'Apart from that' improves readability.

× Yes, I feel washing machine and sweeping machine are very important at present, I would say because we, everyone at house, mostly the elders go to work and these machines saves a lot of time and it eases human effort and.

✓ Yes, I feel washing machines and sweeping machines are very important at present, I would say, because everyone at home, mostly the elders, go to work and these machines save a lot of time and ease human effort.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' should be plural to match the context. The verb 'saves' should be 'save' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. Also, 'everyone at house' should be 'everyone at home' for correct preposition usage.

× everyone at house

✓ everyone at home

The preposition 'at' is correctly used, but the noun should be 'home' instead of 'house' in this context to indicate the place where people live.

× these machines saves a lot of time and it eases human effort and.

✓ these machines save a lot of time and ease human effort.

The verb 'saves' should be 'save' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. Also, 'it eases' should be 'ease' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. The sentence was incomplete and the conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary.

× Yes, I do read instructions before using the machine because that gives us an idea to properly use the machine without making any errors and spoiling the machines or damaging the machine I would say and also this is just work to set up and use it.

✓ Yes, I do read instructions before using the machine because they give us an idea of how to properly use the machine without making any errors or damaging it. I would say this also helps to set up and use it correctly.

The plural noun 'instructions' requires the plural verb 'give' instead of 'gives'. The phrase 'spoiling the machines or damaging the machine' is inconsistent; 'damaging it' is clearer. The sentence was long and confusing, so it was split for clarity and correctness.

× that gives us an idea to properly use the machine

✓ that gives us an idea of how to properly use the machine

The phrase 'an idea to use' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' followed by 'how to' to express the manner of using the machine.

× Yes, I think it is important to read instructions so that we can avoid using it improperly and avoid damages as well.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read instructions so that we can avoid using the machine improperly and avoid damage as well.

The pronoun 'it' is ambiguous; specifying 'the machine' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'damages' should be 'damage' as an uncountable noun in this context.

× avoid damages as well

✓ avoid damage as well

'Damage' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'damages' in this context.

× And also by using the instructions or given instructions may save lot of time setting up and using it properly.

✓ Also, by using the instructions, we may save a lot of time setting up and using the machine properly.

The phrase 'may save lot of time' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. Also, 'given instructions' is redundant after 'the instructions'. Adding 'we' as the subject clarifies the sentence.