Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
It's my fridge, I keep face masks in there to call them. In my fridge. I keep face masks in there to cool them down. Putting one on every morning makes my skin feel fresh and weak, like I'm 18 years old again. Also it stores fruit and ice cream. I love them very much.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Oh yeah, totally. I hate cleaning and hardly every time for the washing machines and sewing machines are really important. They are total lifesavers for lazy people like me.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
When I am alone, yes, I just follow the instructions step by step. But with my boyfriend, never. He is very interested in reading instruction I don't understand.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
Sort of for complex machines like treadmills. They sort of for complex machines like treadmills instruction me understand how to use safety, but radio instructions are easier to follow. But for simple machines instruction just feel unnecessary.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在重复和表达不清的问题，建议避免重复句子，表达要简洁明了。同时，'weak'用词不当，应使用更合适的形容词。
예시: My favourite machine at home is the fridge. I keep face masks in it to cool them down before use, which makes my skin feel fresh every morning. Besides that, it also stores fruits and ice cream, which I really enjoy.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不准确，如'sewing machines'应为'sweeping machines'。建议使用更准确的词汇，并避免语法错误。
예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort, especially for people like me who dislike cleaning.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子连接不够流畅，且'instruction'应为复数形式。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: When I am alone, I always follow the instructions step by step. However, when my boyfriend is with me, he reads the instructions carefully because I don't understand them well.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议理清句子结构，使用正确的语法和连接词，使表达更清晰。
예시: I think reading instructions is important for complex machines like treadmills because they help me understand how to use them safely. However, instructions for simple machines like radios are easier to follow, and sometimes I feel they are unnecessary.
문법
× Putting one on every morning makes my skin feel fresh and weak, like I'm 18 years old again.
✓ Putting one on every morning makes my skin feel fresh and soft, like I'm 18 years old again.
这里的形容词应为描述皮肤感觉的词，'weak'（虚弱的）用法不当，应改为'soft'（柔软的）等合适的形容词。
× I hate cleaning and hardly every time for the washing machines and sewing machines are really important.
✓ I hate cleaning and hardly have time, so washing machines and sewing machines are really important.
原句中'hardly every time'用法错误，应为'hardly have time'表示几乎没有时间。且'washing machines and sewing machines'复数形式正确。
× He is very interested in reading instruction I don't understand.
✓ He is very interested in reading instructions I don't understand.
'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，表示说明书。
× Sort of for complex machines like treadmills. They sort of for complex machines like treadmills instruction me understand how to use safety, but radio instructions are easier to follow.
✓ It's important for complex machines like treadmills. Their instructions help me understand how to use them safely, but radio instructions are easier to follow.
原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。需要重组句子，使其完整且通顺。
× But for simple machines instruction just feel unnecessary.
✓ But for simple machines, instructions just feel unnecessary.
'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，且句中缺少逗号以分隔句子成分，使句子更清晰。
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