Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有语法错误和表达不完整，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免语法错误，并且回答时尽量完整表达观点。

예시: My favorite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it keeps me cool during the hot summer. For example, last summer the temperature reached 40 degrees, and I couldn't survive without it. If it ever breaks down, I would feel very uncomfortable.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，'are save'应为'save'。建议注意动词使用和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

예시: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a huge amount of time and effort.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不清晰，如'ski straws'应为'skip the'.建议注意拼写和用词准确，表达更自然。

예시: To be honest, I usually skip the instructions when I get a new machine. For example, when I bought my blender, I quickly glanced at the manual to make sure I didn't use it incorrectly.

제안: 回答中有用词错误，如'additions'应为'accidents'，'state'应为'spilling'。建议注意词汇的准确使用，使表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, I think it's really important because it helps prevent mistakes or even accidents. For example, my friends often use a coffee machine without reading the manual and end up spilling hot water everywhere. So I believe reading the instructions is very important.

× My favorite machine at home is definitely the air condition because it keeps me cool and during hot summer.

✓ My favorite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it keeps me cool during hot summers.

“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，表示空调设备；“during hot summer”应为复数形式“during hot summers”，因为这里指的是一般的夏天而非特指某一年。

× For instance, last summer the temperature had 40° and electric couldn't survive without it.

✓ For instance, last summer the temperature was 40° and I couldn't survive without it.

“electric”用法错误，应为“I”；“temperature had 40°”应改为“temperature was 40°”，因为温度是状态，用be动词。

× If it ever breaks down I think I'd have a.

✓ If it ever breaks down, I think I'd have a problem.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“a problem”，使句子完整且有意义。

× Yes, I think both of them are super important because they are save a huge amount of time and effort.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are super important because they save a huge amount of time and effort.

“they are save”结构错误，应为“they save”，动词直接用一般现在时。

× To be honest, I usually ski straws instructions when I get a new machine.

✓ To be honest, I usually skip reading instructions when I get a new machine.

“ski straws instructions”是拼写错误，应为“skip reading instructions”，表示跳过阅读说明书。

× For instance, when I bought my blender, I checked the menu quickly just to make sure I didn't mess it up.

✓ For instance, when I bought my blender, I quickly checked the manual just to make sure I didn't mess it up.

“menu”应为“manual”，表示说明书；“checked the menu quickly”改为“quickly checked the manual”，副词位置更自然。

× Yes, I think it's really important because it helps prevent mistakes or even additions.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important because it helps prevent mistakes or even accidents.

“additions”用词不当，应为“accidents”，表示意外或错误。

× For example, my friends often use a coffee machine without reading the manual and end up state hot water everywhere.

✓ For example, my friends often use a coffee machine without reading the manual and end up spilling hot water everywhere.

“end up state hot water”语法错误，应为“end up spilling hot water”，表示结果是洒出热水。