Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý một cách tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trở nên logic và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích TV.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I watch it every day. It helps me relax and improve my mood, especially when I feel stressed or tired after a long day.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời hiện tại có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ý không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và giải thích cụ thể tại sao máy giặt và máy quét quan trọng.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep our clothes and floors clean, which makes our home more comfortable and hygienic.

제안: Câu trả lời cần được diễn đạt rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc đọc hướng dẫn sử dụng.

예시: Definitely yes. I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and safely, making the process more convenient.

제안: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời để tránh bị dang dở và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy thêm ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it helps me use machines safely and avoid mistakes. For example, I always read the manual before using a new device to ensure I operate it correctly.

× My favorite machine and an indispensable part in my home is TV because I watch TV every day and we use TV to reduce stress and energy and boost our mood when we are in bad situation.

✓ My favorite machine and an indispensable part of my home is the TV because I watch TV every day and we use the TV to reduce stress and fatigue and boost our mood when we are in a bad situation.

The noun 'TV' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item. Also, 'energy' is better replaced with 'fatigue' to express the intended meaning of reducing tiredness. 'In bad situation' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Of course yes, because after we use we need to wash and sweep, the machine will be cleaner.

✓ Of course yes, because after we use it, we need to wash and sweep; the machine will be cleaner.

The pronoun 'it' is necessary after 'use' to refer to the machine. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× If we don't usually wash and sweep, the machine will be worse and we can't use it a completely immunization.

✓ If we don't usually wash and sweep, the machine will get worse and we can't use it completely.

The phrase 'a completely immunization' is incorrect and unclear. 'Completely' should modify 'use' directly. 'Get worse' is the correct verb phrase to indicate deterioration.

× Definitely yes. I always read the instructions before I using some machines because I want to know about how to use and about what is used for to be more convenient and available in my.

✓ Definitely yes. I always read the instructions before using some machines because I want to know how to use them and what they are used for to be more convenient and efficient.

The phrase 'before I using' is incorrect; it should be 'before using'. 'Know about how to use' should be 'know how to use'. 'What is used for' should be 'what they are used for'. The sentence ends abruptly and 'available in my' is unclear; 'efficient' is a better word here.

× Reading the instructions is very important before we using any machine because instruction help me understand how to operate the machine safely and for instance, when I often read the instructions before I use something to help me avoid mistakes and make the.

✓ Reading the instructions is very important before we use any machine because instructions help me understand how to operate the machine safely. For instance, I often read the instructions before I use something to help me avoid mistakes and operate it correctly.

'Before we using' should be 'before we use'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the context. The sentence is incomplete and unclear at the end; it needs to be completed for clarity.