Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，建议注意句子结构和用词准确性。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I dislike washing clothes by hand. It helps me save time and effort, especially since my large family generates a lot of laundry daily.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的句子结构和连接词，避免重复，表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us time. This extra time allows us to spend more moments with our family and children. Moreover, these machines clean clothes and houses efficiently.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意时态和单复数形式。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a new machine, especially if it has advanced technology. However, for older models that I am familiar with, I don't need to read the manual.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意语法和逻辑，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions, especially for new or advanced machines. Without reading them, you might use the machine incorrectly. Instructions also help you understand how to operate the machine easily.

× My favorite machines washing machine because I really hate to wash by hand and the washing machine can help me relax, release my hands and also save my time.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine because I really hate to wash by hand and the washing machine can help me relax, release my hands and also save my time.

The word 'machines' is plural but should be singular 'machine' to agree with the singular subject 'My favorite'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'machine'. This is a singular and plural issue combined with sentence structure error.

× And especially in my big family we have to wash the clothes daily, a lot of clothes during during the day, so washing machine really helps me a lot.

✓ And especially in my big family, we have to wash clothes daily, a lot of clothes during the day, so the washing machine really helps me a lot.

The phrase 'the clothes' can be simplified to 'clothes' as a general statement. Also, 'washing machine' should have the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. This is a singular and plural issue and article error.

× Yes, of course, because they can help us to save the time, We can use the rest of the time to stay with our family, play with our kids.

✓ Yes, of course, because they can help us save time. We can use the rest of the time to stay with our family and play with our kids.

The phrase 'help us to save the time' is incorrect; 'help us save time' is the correct form. Also, 'stay with our family, play with our kids' should be connected with 'and' for proper conjunction. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and conjunctions.

× So washing machine, they can wash the clothes very well, expecting machine, they can clean the house very well.

✓ So washing machines can wash clothes very well, and sweeping machines can clean the house very well.

'Washing machine' and 'expecting machine' are singular but refer to plural machines, so they should be plural 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'expecting machine' is a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine'. The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary if the subject is plural. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect word usage.

× It's more like it's more efficiency as I said.

✓ It's more efficient, as I said.

The phrase 'more efficiency' is incorrect; the adjective 'efficient' should be used instead of the noun 'efficiency' to describe the machine. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× especially when the new machines come or new take high techniques, a machines model comes.

✓ especially when new machines come or new high-tech models come.

The phrase 'a machines model' is incorrect; 'machines' is plural but preceded by 'a' which is singular. Also, 'take high techniques' is incorrect and should be 'high-tech'. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect word usage.

× I prefer to read the instruction before I start to use it.

✓ I prefer to read the instructions before I start to use it.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. This is an article error related to countable nouns.

× But for some older models I know exactly how to use it, so at that situation.

✓ But for some older models, I know exactly how to use them, so in that situation, I don't need to read the instructions.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. 'At that situation' should be 'in that situation'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'models'. This is a sentence structure error and incorrect use of pronouns.

× Because you don't know you might make mistake to start a machine without the reading the instruction.

✓ Because you don't know, you might make a mistake by starting a machine without reading the instructions.

'Make mistake' should be 'make a mistake'. 'The reading the instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'reading the instructions' without 'the' before 'reading'. This is an article error and incorrect sentence structure.

× And also reading the instruction before to use it can help you to know easily way how to find the new.

✓ Also, reading the instructions before using it can help you easily learn how to use the new machine.

'Before to use it' is incorrect; it should be 'before using it'. The phrase 'know easily way how to find the new' is unclear and should be 'easily learn how to use the new machine'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure error.