Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，避免重复表达，同时增加连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps my mother wash clothes when she is tired. Moreover, it can also dry clothes, which saves us a lot of time and effort.

제안: 回答中时态和主谓一致错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的语法结构，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines are very important for people who have difficulties or are busy with work because they help wash and dry clothes efficiently, saving a lot of time.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁明了地表达，并注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: Actually, I usually read the instructions on my phone to learn how to use different functions, such as drying clothes or washing for 5 or 10 minutes, which is very helpful.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it helps people understand how to use the machines properly, such as selecting the right settings for drying or washing clothes.

× It's really useful for my mother to washing some clothes when she was really tired.

✓ It's really useful for my mother to wash some clothes when she was really tired.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里应使用to wash而不是to washing。

× It helped us a lot when it can also dry out clothes and washing our clothes.

✓ It helped us a lot when it could also dry out clothes and wash our clothes.

句中时态不一致，前半句是过去时helped，后半句应使用情态动词could表示过去的能力，且动词应为原形wash而非动名词washing。

× It helped us a lot when it can also dry out clothes and washing our clothes.

✓ It helped us a lot when it can also dry out clothes and wash our clothes.

动词并列时应保持形式一致，不能一个用动名词washing，另一个用动词原形dry。

× It's really great for people with them.

✓ It's really great for people with them.

此句中“with them”不明确且不合适，建议删除或改为更具体的表达。

× Yes, I think washing machines was really important for people who have some problem and who is really busy with their works, because they can help people to dry their clothes or it can also help people to wash clothes.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines are really important for people who have some problems and who are really busy with their work, because they can help people to dry their clothes or also help people to wash clothes.

主语washing machines为复数，谓语动词应使用are而非was；people为复数，谓语动词应使用are；work不可数名词，无复数形式。

× It's really help people save many times.

✓ It really helps people save a lot of time.

many times用法不当，应使用a lot of time表示大量时间；help作为第三人称单数动词应加s。

× Actually not. I use my phone to read the instructions instructions and I know where to open them and how to use them with different functions like dry my clothes washing with 10 minutes or 5 minutes.

✓ Actually not. I use my phone to read the instructions and I know where to open it and how to use it with different functions like drying my clothes for 10 minutes or 5 minutes.

instructions是复数，后面指代应使用it而非them；dry应改为动名词形式drying；时间表达应使用for 10 minutes。

× Yes, I think it is really important for people to read the instructions because it's like your books, You need to learn how to use them so that you can make them functions properly used in every ways, like drying clothes or washing them for 10 or 5 minutes.

✓ Yes, I think it is really important for people to read the instructions because it's like your book. You need to learn how to use it so that you can make it function properly in every way, like drying clothes or washing them for 10 or 5 minutes.

instructions是单数概念，指代应使用it；books应为book；functions应为function；every ways应为every way。