Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误和断句不连贯的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免断句错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I use it to search for information and play games with my friends.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议学习正确的主谓一致和句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help people save time and make life more comfortable.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和人称。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions for common devices like computers or phones because I am familiar with them. However, I read the instructions if the machine is complicated.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子完整性和语法正确，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because even familiar machines can have complicated features that require understanding.

× I could use it to search some information or. Play games with my friends.

✓ I could use it to search for some information or play games with my friends.

动词search后面需要加介词for，且or后面的play不应大写，两个动作应并列，使用动词原形。

× washing machines and sweeping machines is the necessary to afford modern people wash.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are necessary for modern people to wash.

主语是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are；necessary前不需要冠词the；动词afford用法错误，应改为for modern people to wash。

× Washing and sweeping could make modern people relaxing and more comfortable.

✓ Washing and sweeping could make modern people relaxed and more comfortable.

make后接形容词时应使用过去分词形式relaxed，表示使人感到放松。

× No, I, I don't read the instructions before you see every machine because, uh, if you have a new computer or a new phone, uh, I'm, I'm so familiar with it, so I couldn't read it, but if a difficult machine, I need to read it.

✓ No, I don't read the instructions before using every machine because, uh, if I have a new computer or a new phone, uh, I'm so familiar with it, so I don't read it, but if it's a difficult machine, I need to read it.

句中you用错，应使用第一人称I；couldn't读作过去时不合适，应使用一般现在时don't；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× Of course it is significant to read the instructions because. You are familiar machine also have also has some difficult implications. You need to read it.

✓ Of course it is important to read the instructions because even machines you are familiar with also have some difficult functions. You need to read them.

significant用法不当，改为important更合适；句子结构不完整且有重复词also has，应简化并改正；implications用词不当，改为functions更贴切。