Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、'movie machine'という表現は不自然で、'movie projector'を繰り返すか、'it'を使う方が良いです。また、理由や感想をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: My favorite machine at home is a movie projector. I often use it every weekend to watch films with my family, which creates a cozy and enjoyable atmosphere. It helps us relax and spend quality time together.

제안: 回答に誤った単語（'oil machine'や'sleep machine'）が含まれており、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、正しい語彙を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they help us clean our homes quickly and efficiently, saving time for other activities.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りがあり、'introduction'ではなく'instructions'を使うべきです。理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important information on how to operate it safely and efficiently, preventing accidents.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。'reading instructions is important'と明確に述べ、理由を具体的に説明する必要があります。

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it helps us understand potential dangers and how to avoid accidents when using machines.

× My favorite machine in my home is a movie projector.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a movie projector.

No correction needed here as 'machine' and 'movie projector' are correctly used in singular form.

× I often use it every weekend and we can watch a movie by using the movie machine.

✓ I often use it every weekend and we can watch a movie using the movie machine.

The phrase 'by using' is unnecessarily wordy; 'using' alone is sufficient and more natural in this context.

× Yeah, I think an oil machine and a sleep machine are both important because if you use it, you don't have to clean your home by yourself, which means you can have extra time and save time and do something else.

✓ Yeah, I think an oil machine and a sleep machine are both important because if you use them, you don't have to clean your home by yourself, which means you can have extra time, save time, and do something else.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to two machines, so it should be plural 'them'. Also, adding commas improves clarity.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using machine because the introduction has necessary knowledge to use a machine effectively and so I think leading instruction allow us to use it without accident and better.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because the instructions have necessary knowledge to use a machine effectively, and so I think reading instructions allows us to use it safely and better.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. 'Using machine' needs the article 'a machine'. 'Introduction' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. 'Leading instruction' is unclear and corrected to 'reading instructions'. Subject-verb agreement corrected from 'allow' to 'allows'. Added 'safely' for clarity.

× Yeah, I think reading instruction is very important, umm, because if you don't need instruction, you may miss some important information and such as which is related to the accident, danger, danger situation. So you must lose it so that you refrain from.

✓ Yeah, I think reading instructions is very important, umm, because if you don't read instructions, you may miss some important information, such as those related to accidents and dangerous situations. So you must not ignore them to avoid harm.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'If you don't need instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'if you don't read instructions'. The phrase 'such as which is related to the accident, danger, danger situation' is unclear and corrected to 'such as those related to accidents and dangerous situations'. 'You must lose it so that you refrain from' is unclear and corrected to 'you must not ignore them to avoid harm' for clarity.