Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免冗余，提升表达的流畅度。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it cools my room during the hot summer, making me feel very comfortable. Additionally, it helps remove dust from the air, which makes the environment fresher and healthier. Therefore, this machine is essential for me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致和动词形式。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For example, washing machines clean clothes much faster than washing by hand, so I have more time to enjoy with my family.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to avoid making mistakes and learn how to use the machine properly.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和词汇使用，确保表达准确和连贯。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions carefully before using machines because it helps me avoid mistakes and use them safely. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the instructions taught me how to use and maintain it properly.

× Besides, it's also performance air removing dust and so the environment feel more fresher and healthier.

✓ Besides, it also performs air dust removal, so the environment feels fresher and healthier.

原句中 'performance' 用法错误，应使用动词 'performs' 来表达机器的功能；'feel more fresher' 中 'more' 与比较级 'fresher' 重复，应该去掉 'more'。

× Besides, it's also performance air removing dust and so the environment feel more fresher and healthier.

✓ Besides, it also performs air dust removal, so the environment feels fresher and healthier.

主语 'environment' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'feels'，而不是复数 'feel'。

× By using washing machines, it can save my time compared to wash clothes by hand, so I have more time to enjoy with my family.

✓ By using washing machines, I can save my time compared to washing clothes by hand, so I have more time to enjoy with my family.

句中 'it' 指代不明确，应使用主语 'I'；'compared to wash clothes' 中 'wash' 应改为动名词 'washing'。

× By using washing machines, it can save my time compared to wash clothes by hand, so I have more time to enjoy with my family.

✓ By using washing machines, I can save my time compared to washing clothes by hand, so I have more time to enjoy with my family.

'compared to' 后应接动名词形式，故 'wash' 应改为 'washing'。

× Yes, I will read the instructions because I want to escape from making mistakes and I want to learn more about how to using the machines.

✓ Yes, I will read the instructions because I want to avoid making mistakes and I want to learn more about how to use the machines.

'escape from making mistakes' 用法不当，常用表达是 'avoid making mistakes'；'how to using' 中 'using' 应为动词原形 'use'。

× Yes, I will read the instructions because I want to escape from making mistakes and I want to learn more about how to using the machines.

✓ Yes, I will read the instructions because I want to avoid making mistakes and I want to learn more about how to use the machines.

'escape from' 用法不当，通常用 'avoid' 来表达避免错误；'how to using' 中 'to' 是不定式标志，后面应接动词原形 'use'。

× Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using machines because it helped me advise making mistakes and ensure I open it safely.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using machines because it helps me avoid making mistakes and ensures I operate it safely.

句中时态不一致，'always read' 是现在时，后面应保持现在时态，故 'helped' 改为 'helps'，'advise making mistakes' 用词错误，应为 'avoid making mistakes'，'ensure I open it safely' 中 'open' 用词不当，应为 'operate'。

× Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using machines because it helped me advise making mistakes and ensure I open it safely.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using machines because it helps me avoid making mistakes and ensures I operate it safely.

'advise making mistakes' 中 'advise' 用法错误，应为 'avoid'；'open it safely' 中 'open' 不符合语境，应为 'operate'。

× For example, when I bought a new coffee makers, reading the instructions taught me how to use it properly and maintain sphere In this way I can.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, reading the instructions taught me how to use it properly and maintain it. In this way, I can.

'coffee makers' 应为单数 'coffee maker'，因为前面有 'a new'；句子末尾不完整，补充 'maintain it' 并分句使句子完整。