Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
The running machine and The Walking machine. I have both. They are great. I like to run in the morning. So stop it, stop it. Thanks.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yes, they are important.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
No, I don't like to read the instructions. I like to do things with my own hands and my my my own minds.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
No, I don't think it's important. We can do things with our imagination or with our own hands, perhaps.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 40.0제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتركيزًا، وتجنب التكرار والكلمات غير المفهومة. استخدم جمل كاملة ومنظمة لتوضيح رأيك بشكل أفضل.
예시: My favourite machines at home are the running machine and the walking machine. I enjoy using them every morning because they help me stay fit and healthy.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 30.0제안: حاول أن توسع إجابتك بإضافة أسباب أو أمثلة تدعم رأيك، واستخدم كلمات ربط لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا ومنطقية.
예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort in cleaning our homes, making daily chores much easier.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 35.0제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب التكرار. يمكنك شرح سبب عدم قراءتك للتعليمات بطريقة أكثر تفصيلًا.
예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I prefer to learn by trying things myself and using my intuition.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 40.0제안: حاول أن تقدم رأيًا متوازنًا مع توضيح الأسباب، واستخدم كلمات ربط لتقوية إجابتك وجعلها أكثر إقناعًا.
예시: I don't think it's always necessary to read instructions because sometimes we can figure things out by using our imagination and hands-on experience, but reading instructions can be helpful for complex machines.
문법
× The running machine and The Walking machine.
✓ The running machine and the walking machine.
The word 'The' should not be capitalized in the middle of a sentence unless it is a proper noun. Here, 'the' is a definite article and should be lowercase.
× I like to do things with my own hands and my my my own minds.
✓ I like to do things with my own hands and my own mind.
The phrase 'my my my own minds' contains repetition and incorrect plural form. 'Mind' should be singular here because it refers to the individual's own mind, and repetition is unnecessary and incorrect.
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