Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更直接地表达最喜欢的机器，并避免使用口语化的表达如“stuff”。此外，句子结构可以更简洁，避免冗余。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. For instance, I don't need to wash clothes by hand, which is very convenient.

제안: 回答中有重复表达“save a lot of time”，应避免重复并使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and keep my home clean and tidy, allowing me to focus on more meaningful activities.

제안: 回答较自然，但可以用更正式的表达替代“energy consuming”，并且可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: No, I rarely read instructions because modern machines are designed to be user-friendly, so I don't need to spend extra time or effort on reading manuals.

제안: 回答中有口语填充词“Umm”和“uh”，应避免使用。表达应更清晰，且“hack devices”用词不准确，应改为“new devices”或“modern devices”。

예시: I believe it is important for elderly people to read instructions carefully because they may be less familiar with modern devices and need clear guidance to use them effectively.

× Wow, it's really hard for me to pick a favorite machine in my home because they are useful stuff in my eyes.

✓ Wow, it's really hard for me to pick a favorite machine in my home because they are useful things in my eyes.

这里的'stuff'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式'they are useful stuff'。应使用可数名词复数形式'things'来表达多个有用的物品。

× I don't have to watch my clothes by my hand.

✓ I don't have to wash my clothes by hand.

短语应为'by hand'，表示用手工方式，而不是'by my hand'。这里的介词使用错误。

× I think they both are very important in my daily life because this kind of machines can help me save a lot of time so I can spend my time in something meaningful.

✓ I think they both are very important in my daily life because these kinds of machines can help me save a lot of time so I can spend my time on something meaningful.

'this kind of machines'中，'this kind'应搭配单数名词，或者用复数形式'these kinds of machines'。另外，'spend my time in something'应改为'spend my time on something'，介词使用错误。

× Well, it helps my home become more clean and tidy and also save a lot of time.

✓ Well, it helps my home become cleaner and tidier and also saves a lot of time.

'more clean'应使用比较级形式'cleaner'，'tidy'同理应为'tidier'。此外，主语是单数，动词应为'saves'。

× No, I hardly ever read any instructions because I believe nowadays the machine designs are very consumer friendly.

✓ No, I hardly ever read instructions because I believe nowadays machine designs are very consumer-friendly.

'any instructions'在否定句中用法不当，'hardly ever'本身是否定含义，后面不宜再用'any'。此外，'consumer friendly'应连写为'consumer-friendly'。

× I don't have to spend extra time to read instructions which is time consuming and energy consuming.

✓ I don't have to spend extra time reading instructions, which is time-consuming and energy-consuming.

'spend time to do'应改为'spend time doing'，动词后接动名词形式。'time consuming'和'energy consuming'应加连字符，构成复合形容词。

× They need to read uh instructions clearly so that they can figure out how to use it efficiently.

✓ They need to read the instructions clearly so that they can figure out how to use them efficiently.

'instructions'为复数，指代时应使用复数代词'them'，而不是单数代词'it'。