Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜爱空调的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免重复。

예시: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool and comfortable during the hot summer months.

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但存在语法错误和词汇使用不当（如“wait clothes”，“swamping machine”）。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I think washing machines are important because washing clothes by hand is tiring. However, I don't find sweeping machines necessary since I prefer cleaning the house myself.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清（如“interaction”应为“instructions”，“Power Mechanical engineering”表达不准确）。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并注意句子结构。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I like to explore how the machine works by myself. I find it interesting to learn through experience.

제안: 回答中词汇错误较多（如“intrusion”应为“instructions”，“raise the instruction”表达不当），句子结构混乱。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达观点，并注意语法。

예시: Sometimes, it's not necessary to read the instructions for simple machines. However, for expensive or complex machines, I always read the instructions to avoid damaging them.

× My favorite machine is air condition since I barely had summer and when summer I will be straight all over my head because using the air conditions it will make me cool down and make me feel more comfortable.

✓ My favorite machine is the air conditioner since I barely have summer, and when summer comes, I will be sweating all over my head. Using the air conditioner makes me cool down and feel more comfortable.

这里“air condition”和“air conditions”使用错误，正确的单数形式是“air conditioner”。此外，“summer”作为季节名词通常不加冠词，且“have summer”表达不准确，应为“have summer weather”或“have summer”。“will be straight all over my head”表达不清，应改为“will be sweating all over my head”。

× So my favorite machine is air conditioned.

✓ So my favorite machine is the air conditioner.

“air conditioned”是形容词，表示“有空调的”，这里应使用名词“air conditioner”表示机器。

× I think washing machine is important since we will wait clothes every day and will need to wash it and it's very hard and tired to wash by myself.

✓ I think the washing machine is important since we wear clothes every day and need to wash them. It's very hard and tiring to wash by myself.

“washing machine”前应加定冠词“the”。“wait clothes”错误，应为“wear clothes”。“wash it”指代不明确，衣服为复数，应使用“wash them”。“tired”形容人，形容词应为“tiring”。

× But I think the swamping machine is not important for me since I can just clean my house by myself and it's not.

✓ But I think the sweeping machine is not important for me since I can just clean my house by myself, and it's not necessary.

“swamping machine”拼写错误，应为“sweeping machine”。句尾“it's not”表达不完整，应补充为“it's not necessary”。

× No, I won't read the interaction before using the machine since my university manager is Power Mechanical engineering and I very like to get the research in the machine and how to use it by myself.

✓ No, I won't read the instructions before using the machine since my university major is Power Mechanical Engineering, and I really like to research the machine and figure out how to use it by myself.

“interaction”应为“instructions”，表示“说明书”。“manager”应为“major”，表示专业。短语“get the research in the machine”表达不当，应改为“research the machine”。

× I think it's a funny thing to find how to use it.

✓ I think it's fun to figure out how to use it.

“a funny thing”通常指“有趣的事情”，但这里表达“觉得有趣”更自然用“fun”。“find how to use it”表达不自然，应改为“figure out how to use it”。

× I think sometime it's not very important to read the intrusion for the EC machine to use, but if I want to use a compressed and expensive machine, I will raise the instruction to avoid break the machine or use the wrong way to make it break.

✓ I think sometimes it's not very important to read the instructions for the AC machine, but if I want to use a complex and expensive machine, I will read the instructions to avoid breaking the machine or using it the wrong way and causing damage.

“sometime”应为“sometimes”，表示“有时”。“intrusion”应为“instructions”，表示“说明书”。“EC machine”应为“AC machine”，即空调。动词“raise the instruction”错误，应为“read the instructions”。“avoid break the machine”应为“avoid breaking the machine”。