Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite machine in your home?
수험생
I guess my favorite appliances in my kitchen of my home would be the refrigerator because it not only helps maintain the freshness of ingredient but also contains various traditional and delicious home cooked food.
시험관
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
수험생
Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are very important in saving time and effort for the members of our family. For example, we usually utilize washing machine to clean our clothes quickly, which is much more efficient than washing by hand. And addition, sweeping machines help us clean our house.
시험관
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
수험생
Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions and guidelines before utilizing an appliance is very important in order to secure its useful lifespan. For instance, our family have utilized our washing machine for five years, so I guess if we didn't read the instructions carefully, our washing machine could be broken down.
시험관
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
수험생
Yes, definitely. First of all, as I was saying above, that it can save its useful lifespan. More importantly, if we read the instructions carefully, we will probably know how to use that machine correctly and efficiently.
평가
총점
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng số ít "appliance" thay vì "appliances" khi nói về một máy yêu thích. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể rút gọn để tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.
예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps ingredients fresh and stores a variety of traditional, delicious home-cooked meals.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và số ít khi nói về máy móc (ví dụ: "washing machines" thay vì "washing machine" khi nói chung). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể sử dụng các từ nối hợp lý hơn như "in addition" thay vì "and addition" để câu nói mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For instance, we use washing machines to clean clothes quickly, which is much more efficient than washing by hand. In addition, sweeping machines help us keep our house clean.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "our family has utilized" thay vì "have utilized". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể dùng từ đơn giản hơn như "use" thay vì "utilize" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions before using a machine is important to ensure it lasts longer. For example, our family has used our washing machine for five years, and I believe this is because we followed the instructions carefully.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ không tự nhiên như "save its useful lifespan" và thay bằng cách diễn đạt khác như "help extend its lifespan". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể mạch lạc hơn nếu dùng các từ nối như "more importantly" một cách chính xác và tránh lặp lại cụm từ "as I was saying above".
예시: Yes, definitely. Reading instructions helps extend the lifespan of a machine. More importantly, it teaches us how to use the machine correctly and efficiently.
문법
× I guess my favorite appliances in my kitchen of my home would be the refrigerator because it not only helps maintain the freshness of ingredient but also contains various traditional and delicious home cooked food.
✓ I guess my favorite appliance in my kitchen of my home would be the refrigerator because it not only helps maintain the freshness of ingredients but also contains various traditional and delicious home-cooked food.
The word 'appliances' is plural but the sentence refers to a single item, 'the refrigerator', so it should be singular 'appliance'. Also, 'ingredient' should be plural 'ingredients' because it refers to multiple items. 'Home cooked' should be hyphenated as 'home-cooked' when used as an adjective.
× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are very important in saving time and effort for the members of our family.
✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in saving time and effort for the members of our family.
Since 'washing machine' is paired with 'sweeping machines' (plural), it should also be plural 'washing machines' to maintain parallel structure and correct plural usage.
× For example, we usually utilize washing machine to clean our clothes quickly, which is much more efficient than washing by hand.
✓ For example, we usually utilize the washing machine to clean our clothes quickly, which is much more efficient than washing by hand.
The definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine' because it refers to a specific machine known to both speaker and listener.
× And addition, sweeping machines help us clean our house.
✓ In addition, sweeping machines help us clean our house.
The phrase 'And addition' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In addition' to introduce an additional point.
× For instance, our family have utilized our washing machine for five years, so I guess if we didn't read the instructions carefully, our washing machine could be broken down.
✓ For instance, our family has utilized our washing machine for five years, so I guess if we didn't read the instructions carefully, our washing machine could break down.
The subject 'family' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'could be broken down' is incorrect; the correct form is 'could break down' to express potential malfunction.
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