Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa shizen de, shōjiki ni kotaete imasu ga, bunpō no shōsai na misu to fukuzatsu na setsuzoku-shi no fukusei ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'who' wa 'and' ni suru beki de, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte, kotae o motto rikai shiyasuku shite kudasai. Mata, 5-bun no bunshō ni osae, jūyō na jōhō o fukameru tame ni, motto shōsai na jōhō o tsukeru koto ga dekimasu.

예시: My favorite machine at home is my cell phone because I use it every day for many purposes. For example, I look for recipes when I cook and also check routes when I go somewhere. It is very useful and I can't live without it.

제안: Kotae wa rikai shiyasuku, shizen na eigo de arimasu ga, setsuzoku-shi ga tarinai koto to, motto shōsai na jōhō o tsukeru koto de kotae o fukameru koto ga dekimasu. Tatoeba, 'because' no ato ni motto riyū o tsukeru to, kotae ga motto kōka-teki ni narimasu.

예시: I think washing machines are very important because I used to wash clothes by hand, which took a lot of time and effort. Therefore, washing machines help me save time and make my chores easier.

제안: Kotae wa shizen de, shōjiki ni kotaete imasu ga, 'using using' no kurikaeshi no misu o naosu koto to, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kotae o motto rikai shiyasuku suru koto ga hitsuyō desu. Mata, motto shōsai na jōhō o tsukeru koto de kotae o fukameru koto ga dekimasu.

예시: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I try to figure out how to use it by myself, and if I have any problems, I search for solutions on my cell phone.

제안: Kotae wa rikai shiyasuku, shizen na eigo de arimasu ga, bunpō no misu to kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'used to use' wa 'used to using' ni shite, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte kotae o motto rikai shiyasuku shite kudasai. Mata, motto shōsai na riyū o tsukeru koto de kotae o fukameru koto ga dekimasu.

예시: I don't think it is always important to read instructions because we are used to using some machines and can guess how to operate them. However, when we face difficulties, it is necessary to have the skills to read and understand the instructions.

× For example, I look for recipes when I cook who I look for routes to go somewhere.

✓ For example, I look for recipes when I cook or I look for routes to go somewhere.

The original sentence uses 'who' incorrectly as a conjunction. The correct conjunction to connect two clauses here is 'or'. This is a conjunction error, so replacing 'who' with 'or' improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× I think washing machines are important because I used to live without washing machine and washing by my hands.

✓ I think washing machines are important because I used to live without a washing machine and washed by hand.

The phrase 'without washing machine' lacks an article before the singular noun 'washing machine'. Also, 'washing by my hands' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'washed by hand'. This correction addresses article usage and natural phrasing.

× I think washing machines are important because I used to live without washing machine and washing by my hands.

✓ I think washing machines are important because I used to live without a washing machine and washed by hand.

The verb 'washing' should be in past tense 'washed' to match the past context 'used to live'. This correction ensures tense consistency.

× I don't read the instructions before using using a machine.

✓ I don't read the instructions before using a machine.

The word 'using' is repeated twice by mistake. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× It's not important to read the instructions because we are used to use some kind of machines and we can guess how to use it.

✓ It's not important to read the instructions because we are used to using some kinds of machines and we can guess how to use them.

The phrase 'used to use' is incorrect; the correct form is 'used to using' (verb + -ing). Also, 'some kind of machines' should be pluralized to 'some kinds of machines' to match plural 'machines'. Finally, 'use it' should be 'use them' to agree with plural 'machines'.