Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid repeating the same ideas. Also, use singular or plural forms correctly and provide specific reasons why you like the washing machine.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort, especially when I am busy. It helps me keep my clothes clean without much hassle.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, complete your sentences to fully express your opinion.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and energy, especially when we are busy with work or studies.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and clearly, avoiding repeated words. Also, explain more specifically why reading instructions is helpful.

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it correctly and avoid mistakes.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete with many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear reason why reading instructions is important.

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it provides valuable tips on how to use machines properly and avoid errors.

× Well, it would be definitely washing machine because they always help me help my they always reduce my energy and effort.

✓ Well, it would definitely be the washing machine because it always helps me and reduces my energy and effort.

The subject 'washing machine' is singular, so the pronouns and verbs should also be singular ('it', 'helps', 'reduces'). Also, the sentence structure was unclear and redundant, so it was simplified for clarity.

× Well, especially when I'm busy, I always use them because they always help me learn.

✓ Well, especially when I'm busy, I always use it because it always helps me.

Referring to 'washing machine' which is singular, so pronouns should be singular ('it', 'helps'). The phrase 'help me learn' seems out of context and was corrected to 'helps me' for clarity.

× Yes, of course, I think they are very they are very important in our lives because umm well, when not when we use them uh when we use them, we always save a lot of energy so so especially busy during busy time we always we.

✓ Yes, of course, I think they are very important in our lives because when we use them, we always save a lot of energy, especially during busy times.

The sentence had repetition and unclear phrasing. 'Busy time' was corrected to plural 'busy times' to match general usage. The sentence was restructured for clarity and fluency.

× Yes, I think so. I usually read about read the instructions before I use the machine because they it really helps reduce the machine's errors and how to how to operate the machines appropriately.

✓ Yes, I think so. I usually read the instructions before I use the machine because it really helps reduce errors and shows how to operate the machine appropriately.

The pronouns 'they it' were incorrect and redundant; corrected to singular 'it' referring to 'the instructions'. Also, 'machine's errors' was simplified to 'errors' for clarity. Repetition 'how to how to' was removed.

× So so I think it is very.

✓ So, I think it is very important.

The sentence was incomplete; added 'important' to complete the thought and make it meaningful.

× Yes, of course, as I am, I, as I mentioned before, umm, reading instruction is very important, important to reduce errors because umm, they, they a lot of, they are a lot of valuable tips to reduce errors or errors and how to start the machines and.

✓ Yes, of course, as I mentioned before, reading instructions is very important to reduce errors because there are a lot of valuable tips on how to start the machines and avoid errors.

'Reading instruction' was corrected to plural 'reading instructions' as instructions are usually plural. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammar, replacing 'they, they a lot of' with 'there are a lot of'. The ending was completed for coherence.