Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简单，内容重复且缺乏连贯的连接词。建议丰富细节，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is my iPad because it allows me to watch films, study, and keep in touch with my close friends and family. Moreover, its portability makes it very convenient to use anywhere in the house.

제안: 回答过于简短且内容重复，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体原因和例子，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save us a lot of time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines help keep the house tidy with minimal physical work.

제안: 回答重复且缺乏具体细节，表达不够自然。建议避免重复，增加原因和具体细节，并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it safely and efficiently. This way, I can avoid mistakes and prolong the machine's lifespan.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达不够自然。建议丰富内容，使用更地道的表达和连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial since they provide detailed guidance on using machines correctly and safely. Furthermore, following instructions can prevent damage and ensure the machine works effectively.

× I can watch films, study, and chat with my close friends and family members on my iPad.

✓ I can watch films, study, and chat with my close friends and family members using my iPad.

这里介词“on”用法不当，通常说“using my iPad”表示使用某设备，更符合英语习惯。

× They are convenient for us to use.

✓ They are convenient to use.

“convenient”后面直接接不定式“to use”更自然，介词“for us”多余且不符合习惯用法。

× The instructions are very important for us to use.

✓ The instructions are very important for us.

“important”后面不需要加“to use”，因为“instructions”本身就是用来指导的，句子中“to use”多余且不自然。

× instructions can let us know how to use the machines and how to use them well.

✓ instructions can let us know how to use the machines well.

句中“how to use the machines”和“how to use them”重复，且“them”指代不明确，合并为“how to use the machines well”更简洁且清晰。