Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'scared of coat' nên là 'scared of cold'). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the heater because I can't stand cold weather. During winter, I always use it to keep my house warm and comfortable.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'family needs' nên là 'family's needs', 'sweeping machine are' nên là 'sweeping machines are'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng số nhiều và sở hữu cách, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I think the importance of washing and sweeping machines depends on each family's needs. For instance, my family finds the washing machine essential because we don't have time to wash clothes by hand. On the other hand, sweeping machines are less necessary since sweeping is quick and I can do it myself easily.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, gây khó hiểu (ví dụ: 'instruction are' nên là 'instructions are', 'Julie watch detail videos' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully to learn how to use the machine properly. If the instructions are unclear, I watch detailed videos online to understand better and avoid making mistakes.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'guide in LESS' không rõ nghĩa, 'Looking at actually reading' không hợp lý). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, reading instructions is very important. If you don't follow them, you might damage the machine or cause it to stop working. Reading instructions helps you use machines safely and efficiently.

× However, sweeping machine are not that essential since sweeping only takes a short time and I can do it myself easily.

✓ However, sweeping machines are not that essential since sweeping only takes a short time and I can do it myself easily.

The noun 'sweeping machine' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural, causing a mismatch. Since the context refers to machines in general, the plural form 'machines' should be used to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× However, sometimes the instruction are not very clear so I Julie watch detail videos online to learn the correct way to use it is help me feel more confident of an award mixing mistakes.

✓ However, sometimes the instructions are not very clear so I just watch detailed videos online to learn the correct way to use it which helps me feel more confident and avoid making mistakes.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'Julie' seems to be a typo for 'just', 'detail' should be 'detailed' as an adjective, and the sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× However, sometimes the instruction are not very clear so I Julie watch detail videos online to learn the correct way to use it is help me feel more confident of an award mixing mistakes.

✓ However, sometimes the instructions are not very clear so I just watch detailed videos online to learn the correct way to use it which helps me feel more confident and avoid making mistakes.

The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously; it should clearly refer to 'the machine'. Also, the phrase 'is help me feel more confident of an award mixing mistakes' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'which helps me feel more confident and avoid making mistakes' for clarity and correctness.

× For example, if you don't follow the guide in LESS, you might make mistakes that could damage the machine or cause it to stop.

✓ For example, if you don't follow the guide properly, you might make mistakes that could damage the machine or cause it to stop.

The phrase 'in LESS' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a typo or misused preposition. Replacing it with 'properly' clarifies the meaning that following the guide correctly is important.

× Looking at actually reading the instructions help you use the machine more efficiently and safely.

✓ Actually reading the instructions helps you use the machine more efficiently and safely.

The phrase 'Looking at actually reading the instructions' is awkward and incorrect. The sentence should start directly with 'Actually reading the instructions' as the subject, and the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject.