Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议你使用简单正确的句子结构，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。例如，使用"because"连接原因，使用"so"表达结果。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I don't like washing clothes by hand. It helps me save time and keeps my clothes clean and tidy, so I find it very useful.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的连接词如"on one hand"和"on the other hand"，并且表达要简洁明了，避免无关内容。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important. On one hand, they are easy to use and help keep my home and clothes clean. On the other hand, they save me a lot of time for other activities.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的时态和介词，如"before using a machine"，并且用连接词清晰表达原因。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. On one hand, machines are expensive, so I want to take good care of them. On the other hand, instructions help me use the machines more efficiently.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的连接词和句子结构，避免不相关的词汇，表达要简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I think reading instructions is important. On one hand, it helps me take good care of the machine and extend its lifespan. On the other hand, it helps me understand how to use the machine properly.

× I think it's a washing machine because I'm lazy grow an I hate to wash my clothes everyday.

✓ I think it's a washing machine because I'm lazy and I hate washing my clothes every day.

The phrase 'hate to wash' is grammatically acceptable but 'hate washing' is more natural here. Also, 'grow an' is incorrect; it should be 'and'. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the adverb 'every day' should be used here.

× I think watch the clothes everyday is the trouble in my daily life.

✓ I think washing the clothes every day is a trouble in my daily life.

The verb 'watch' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'washing'. Also, 'everyday' should be 'every day' as it is an adverbial phrase. 'The trouble' should be 'a trouble' or better 'a problem'.

× But the washing machine it can help me keep my clothes tidy and help me relieve my suggest.

✓ But the washing machine can help me keep my clothes tidy and relieve my stress.

The sentence has redundancy with 'the washing machine it'. 'Relieve my suggest' is incorrect; likely intended 'relieve my stress' or 'suggestion' is wrong here.

× Yes, I think they are important only one hand, they're convenient to operate an it can help me keep my heart home and my clothes tidy.

✓ Yes, I think they are important. On one hand, they're convenient to operate and they can help me keep my home and my clothes tidy.

The phrase 'only one hand' should be 'on one hand'. 'An it' should be 'and they'. 'Heart home' is incorrect; likely 'home' is intended.

× And in which case I will keep her positive mind to solve the other problem in my daily life.

✓ And in that case, I will keep a positive mind to solve other problems in my daily life.

'Her positive mind' is incorrect; should be 'a positive mind'. 'In which case' is awkward; 'in that case' is better. 'The other problem' should be 'other problems'.

× Yes, I will read the instruction before I using machine.

✓ Yes, I will read the instructions before using the machine.

'Before I using machine' is incorrect; it should be 'before using the machine'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× On the one hand most of machine there expensive so I cherish them.

✓ On the one hand, most machines are expensive so I cherish them.

'Most of machine' should be 'most machines'. 'There expensive' is incorrect; should be 'are expensive'.

× I want to expand their life spend on the other hand.

✓ I want to extend their lifespan. On the other hand,

'Expand their life spend' is incorrect; 'extend their lifespan' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be split.

× I think it's important for us to using instruction.

✓ I think it's important for us to use instructions.

'To using' is incorrect; after 'to' the base form 'use' should be used. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× It can help me use the machine better and more efficient.

✓ It can help me use the machine better and more efficiently.

'More efficient' is an adjective; here an adverb 'more efficiently' is needed to modify the verb 'use'.

× On one hand, as their buyer, using the instruction can help me take good care of the machine and prolong their lifespan.

✓ On one hand, as a buyer, using the instructions can help me take good care of the machine and prolong its lifespan.

'Their buyer' is incorrect; should be 'a buyer'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Their lifespan' should be 'its lifespan' referring to the machine.

× On the other hand, as Earth Hour using the instruction, it can help me understand the machine better.

✓ On the other hand, by using the instructions, it can help me understand the machine better.

'As Earth Hour using the instruction' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'by using the instructions'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.