Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 문법과 어휘를 개선하세요. 예를 들어, 'it kept cool temperature' 대신 'it keeps the room cool'라고 표현하고, 'important to sleeping well' 대신 'important for sleeping well'로 수정하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장 간 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 더 논리적으로 만드세요.

예시: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps the room cool during hot weather. Moreover, it helps me sleep well in the summer by maintaining a comfortable temperature and cleaning the air.

제안: 답변을 더 자연스럽고 완전한 문장으로 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'Also keep things clean'은 주어와 동사가 빠져있어 문법적으로 완전하지 않습니다. 연결어를 활용해 문장들을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. They also help keep our homes clean. In addition, by doing chores quickly, these machines allow people to spend more quality time with their families.

제안: 문법과 어휘를 개선하여 답변을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'use right way an not breaking it all' 대신 'use it correctly and avoid damaging it'라고 표현하세요. 또한, 문장 구조를 명확히 하여 의도를 분명히 전달하세요.

예시: Yes, definitely. I always read the instructions to make sure I use the machine correctly and avoid damaging it. This also helps me understand what to do if something goes wrong.

제안: 문법과 문장 구조를 개선하여 답변을 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'it is hoped to understand how to use properly' 대신 'it helps me understand how to use the machine properly'라고 표현하세요. 또한, 문장 간 연결어를 사용하여 논리적인 흐름을 만드세요.

예시: Yes, I absolutely think it is important to read the instructions before using machines because it helps me understand how to use them properly. Also, it can prevent mistakes and save time in the long run.

× I think air conditioner is my favorite machine in my home because it kept cool temperature during hot weather.

✓ I think the air conditioner is my favorite machine in my home because it keeps the temperature cool during hot weather.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'air conditioner' and 'temperature'. Also, 'kept' should be 'keeps' to agree with the present tense context. Articles are necessary to specify particular objects, and verb tense should match the time frame.

× I think air conditioner is my favorite machine in my home because it kept cool temperature during hot weather.

✓ I think the air conditioner is my favorite machine in my home because it keeps the temperature cool during hot weather.

The verb 'kept' is in past tense but the sentence is about a general fact, so present tense 'keeps' is appropriate.

× Also it is important to sleeping well in summer an air conditioner keep air clean.

✓ Also, it is important for sleeping well in summer, and an air conditioner keeps the air clean.

The phrase 'important to sleeping' should be 'important for sleeping'. Also, 'an' should be 'and', and 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular subject.

× Also it is important to sleeping well in summer an air conditioner keep air clean.

✓ Also, it is important for sleeping well in summer, and an air conditioner keeps the air clean.

The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'an air conditioner'.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are important because they can save our time.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they can save our time.

The phrase 'washing machine and sweeping machines' mixes singular and plural; both should be plural to be consistent.

× Also keep things clean.

✓ They also keep things clean.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'They' clarifies who keeps things clean.

× In addition, they can let people do other things or spend time with family.

✓ In addition, they allow people to do other things or spend time with family.

The phrase 'let people do' is informal; 'allow people to do' is more appropriate and clearer.

× Yes, definitely because it makes sure that I use right way an not breaking it all so I can know about something goes wrong.

✓ Yes, definitely because it ensures that I use it the right way and do not break it, so I can know if something goes wrong.

The sentence misuses 'makes sure' and lacks modal verbs; 'ensures' is better. Also, 'use right way' should be 'use it the right way', and 'not breaking' should be 'do not break'. The phrase 'know about something goes wrong' should be 'know if something goes wrong'.

× Yes, I absolutely think it is important to read the instruction before. Using machines because it is hoped to understand how to use properly.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think it is important to read the instructions before using machines because it helps to understand how to use them properly.

The phrase 'read the instruction before. Using machines' is fragmented; it should be 'read the instructions before using machines'. Also, 'it is hoped to understand' is incorrect; 'it helps to understand' is correct.

× Also I it can stop mistakes and save your time is to the end.

✓ Also, it can prevent mistakes and save your time in the end.

The phrase 'I it can stop' is incorrect; 'it can prevent' is correct. 'Save your time is to the end' should be 'save your time in the end'.