Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant words. Use simple and natural English to express your favourite machine and why you like it.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Every morning, I use it to clean my clothes quickly and efficiently.

제안: Your answer is too short and unclear. You should directly answer the question and provide reasons or examples to support your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep the house clean and save time on chores.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. You should give a clear and complete response to the question. Explain briefly why you do or do not read instructions, and use linking words if needed.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and safely.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks detail. Try to give a clear opinion and explain why reading instructions is useful. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because it helps everyone understand how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

× Uh, there are America's now. She did my house market. Every morning and the timeline. I just.

✓ Uh, there is an American washing machine now. She cleans my house every morning on time.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction combines the ideas into coherent sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and logical flow.

× She did my house market.

✓ It cleans my house.

The pronoun 'She' is incorrectly used to refer to a machine. Machines should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'did my house market' is unclear and incorrect; 'cleans my house' is appropriate.

× Every morning and the timeline.

✓ Every morning on time.

The phrase 'and the timeline' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate punctuality is 'on', so 'on time' is used.

× Yes, I believe it's the washing machine in my house. Already.

✓ Yes, I believe the washing machine in my house is important already.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. The correction completes the thought and places 'already' appropriately to indicate emphasis.

× Yes. How I can choose?

✓ Yes. How can I choose?

The original sentence has incorrect word order for a question. In English, questions require inversion of the subject and auxiliary verb.

× Yes, I believe. I believe it's very useful. For everybody. Start.

✓ Yes, I believe it's very useful for everybody to start.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the fragments into a coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning.