Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more focused and clear. Avoid irrelevant information like 'In my religion' which confuses the listener. Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms properly. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and keep it concise within 5 sentences.

예시: My favourite machine at home is my motorbike because it is very convenient for travelling. I learned how to use it through training in my local area. It helps me save a lot of time when I go to different places.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Please focus on answering the question directly with clear sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid confusing or irrelevant details. Try to be specific about why these machines are important.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make household chores easier. For example, my mother uses the sewing machine daily for her tailoring work, and the washing machine helps us clean clothes quickly. These machines save time and effort.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms. Try to explain why reading instructions is helpful with specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I always read the manual when I use a new machine. I also search online to learn how to operate it safely. This helps prevent damage to the machine and keeps me safe while using it.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Please use correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Explain your points clearly and avoid confusing expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine. There are often restrictions, such as age limits and how to use the machine properly. Also, some clothes should not be washed with certain machines, so reading instructions helps avoid problems.

× In my religion I usually prefer to use my motorbike as it is very convenient for me to use them and I have a knowledge about it.

✓ In my region I usually prefer to use my motorbike as it is very convenient for me to use it and I have knowledge about it.

The word 'them' is incorrect because 'motorbike' is singular, so the pronoun should be 'it'. Also, 'a knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'.

× I take our training of it at our locality.

✓ I took our training of it at our locality.

The verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' because the action happened in the past.

× So I use motorbike to travel different places and it saved me a lot of time.

✓ So I use my motorbike to travel to different places and it saves me a lot of time.

The phrase 'use motorbike' needs the possessive pronoun 'my' and the verb 'saved' should be 'saves' to match the present tense used in the sentence.

× Obviously, both machine are very useful to everybody life, as if I talk about me in my home, there assuming machine and washing machine both my mom is a tailor, and it is usually preferred to use swing teen in their daily routine, as well as washing machine also very convenient.

✓ Obviously, both machines are very useful to everybody's life. As for me at home, there are a sweeping machine and a washing machine. My mom is a tailor, and she usually prefers to use the sweeping machine in her daily routine, as well as the washing machine, which is also very convenient.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'both'. 'Everybody life' should be 'everybody's life' to show possession. 'There assuming machine' is unclear and corrected to 'there are a sweeping machine'. 'Swing teen' is corrected to 'sweeping machine'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I help my mom to clean our clothes in washing machines and it is very easy for us.

✓ I help my mom to clean our clothes in the washing machine and it is very easy for us.

'Washing machines' should be singular 'washing machine' if referring to one machine at home. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine'.

× No doubt if the machine is new to me, I usually prefer to read it manually.

✓ No doubt, if the machine is new to me, I usually prefer to read the manual.

The phrase 'read it manually' is incorrect; it should be 'read the manual' as 'manual' is the noun referring to instructions.

× Our search on Internet how to use the use that machine.

✓ I search on the Internet how to use that machine.

The phrase 'Our search' is incorrect; it should be 'I search'. Also, 'on Internet' needs the definite article 'the' as 'on the Internet'.

× So there is no any physical damage goes to machine and to us.

✓ So there is no physical damage to the machine or to us.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect; use 'no' or 'any' but not both. 'Goes to machine' is incorrect; it should be 'to the machine'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× So it is very good option to use manual which are provider with a machine so there is a no difficulty for person to operate it.

✓ So it is a very good option to use the manual which is provided with the machine so there is no difficulty for a person to operate it.

'Use manual' needs the definite article 'the manual'. 'Which are provider' should be 'which is provided'. 'There is a no difficulty' should be 'there is no difficulty'. 'Person' needs the article 'a'.

× Surely it is very important for everybody to read the instructions before using machine as there are many restriction on using machine as age limit and how to use them.

✓ Surely it is very important for everybody to read the instructions before using a machine as there are many restrictions on using machines such as age limits and how to use them.

'Using machine' needs the article 'a machine'. 'Restriction' should be plural 'restrictions'. 'Age limit' should be plural 'age limits' to match 'many'.

× There also a restriction on cloth which are not being contact with the machine.

✓ There is also a restriction on clothes which are not to be in contact with the machine.

'There also a restriction' needs the verb 'is' to be 'There is also a restriction'. 'Cloth' should be plural 'clothes'. 'Are not being contact' is incorrect; it should be 'are not to be in contact'.

× So it is very bad option to reason struction before using machine.

✓ So it is a very bad option to ignore instructions before using a machine.

The phrase 'reason struction' is unclear and likely a mistake; corrected to 'ignore instructions'. 'Using machine' needs the article 'a machine'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.