Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な機械の名前（例：washing machine）を正確に使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。また、文をつなげるために接続詞を使うと良いです。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

제안: 文法の誤りと不完全な文があり、内容が不明瞭です。主語と動詞の一致に注意し、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help me save time and effort in my daily life.

제안: 発音や文の構成に問題があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で正しい文を作る練習をし、理由を明確に述べることを心がけましょう。

예시: Actually, I don't usually read the instructions before using machines because most of them are very easy to use.

제안: 文が断片的で流れが悪いです。理由を述べる際は、文をつなげて一貫性を持たせる練習をしましょう。また、語彙の選択にも注意してください。

예시: I don't think it is important to read instructions because modern machines are very user-friendly and easy to operate without guidance.

× When I started living alone I bought a machine for the washing T seats and the machine is my favorite one.

✓ When I started living alone, I bought a machine for washing T-shirts, and the machine is my favorite one.

The phrase 'for the washing T seats' is incorrect. It should be 'for washing T-shirts' using the verb + -ing form 'washing' to indicate the purpose of the machine. Also, 'T seats' is a mishearing or typo for 'T-shirts'.

× Because it helps me to save time. Or sync the seeds.

✓ Because it helps me to save time or sync the seeds.

The sentence fragments should be combined into one sentence. Also, 'sync the seeds' seems incorrect or unclear; possibly 'sink the seeds' or 'spin the seeds' was intended. Assuming 'spin the seeds' is correct, it should be 'spin the seeds' using the verb + -ing form. However, since the original is unclear, only the sentence structure is corrected here.

× Those machines helps me.

✓ Those machines help me.

The subject 'machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' without 's' to agree in number.

× To save money and effort.

✓ They help me to save money and effort.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'They help me' completes the sentence structure.

× 'Cause if I have to do the things by my or by myself it.

✓ 'Cause if I have to do the things by myself, it would be difficult.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'By my' is incorrect; 'by myself' is correct. Also, the sentence needs completion to make sense.

× Actually I don't read instructions before I use. Machines be cause.

✓ Actually, I don't read instructions before I use machines because...

The sentence is fragmented and 'Machines be cause' is incorrect. 'Because' should be connected to the previous clause, and 'machines' should not be capitalized or separated.

× This entry. Mini machines are Berry. Convenient to use so I don't need to read them.

✓ These days, mini machines are very convenient to use, so I don't need to read the instructions.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain spelling errors ('Berry' instead of 'very'). Combining into a coherent sentence improves clarity.

× Actually, I don't think it's important to read instructions before we use machines.

✓ Actually, I don't think it's important to read instructions before using machines.

The phrase 'before we use machines' is grammatically correct but can be more naturally expressed as 'before using machines'.

× It's because. Modern machines are very user friendly so. It it's a waste of time to. Need instructions before using it.

✓ It's because modern machines are very user-friendly, so it's a waste of time to need instructions before using them.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain pronoun errors. 'It it's' is incorrect; should be 'it's'. Also, 'using it' should be 'using them' to refer to machines (plural).