Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps my food fresh and cold. It is very convenient and saves me a lot of time since I don't have to buy fresh food every day.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us save time and effort when doing household chores.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi về việc đọc hướng dẫn sử dụng mà lại nói về tầm quan trọng của máy móc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu rõ ràng và có liên kết hợp lý.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and avoid damaging it.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng.

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps us understand how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

× Well, my favorite machines in my home is the Riker 'cause is Meg cold, very easy and convenient.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the Riker because it is very cool, very easy and convenient.

The subject 'machines' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'Riker' is singular, so 'machine' should be singular. 'Cause' should be 'because' for clarity. 'Meg cold' seems to be a typo for 'very cool'. Use singular form to match the subject and verb.

× Often uses to prepare, prepare my mood and excite me a lot of time in instead of cooking I can do anything else.

✓ I often use it to prepare my mood and it excites me a lot. Instead of cooking, I can do other things.

The sentence structure is incorrect and prepositions are misused. 'Uses to prepare' should be 'use it to prepare'. 'Excite me a lot of time in' is unclear and should be rephrased. 'In instead of cooking I can do anything else' is confusing; it should be 'Instead of cooking, I can do other things.' Clear preposition use and sentence restructuring are needed.

× My home it just have the machine Jan we washed closed in. Drawings in this.

✓ My home just has the machine that we use to wash clothes in. It is useful for this.

'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'My home'. 'Jan we washed closed in' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'that we use to wash clothes in'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Honestly, I think washing machines and sweeping machine are very important because we save a lot of time and effort.

✓ Honestly, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because we save a lot of time and effort.

'Sweeping machine' should be plural 'sweeping machines' to match 'washing machines' and maintain parallel structure.

× For example, washing clauses by hand can tiring especially when you have many clothes.

✓ For example, washing clothes by hand can be tiring, especially when you have many clothes.

'Clauses' is a typo for 'clothes'. 'Can tiring' is incorrect; it should be 'can be tiring' to use the adjective properly with the verb 'can'.

× This machines will have you make household chores easier.

✓ These machines will help you make household chores easier.

'This machines' is incorrect; 'machines' is plural so it should be 'These machines'. Also, 'have you make' is awkward; 'help you make' is more natural.

× Wells icing is a very important to read the instruction because up before we do anything really stressed or can have we know those are clearly about what we should do and what we're going to do.

✓ Well, reading is very important to understand the instructions because before we do anything, we can avoid stress and know clearly what we should do and what we're going to do.

The original sentence is confusing with incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Wells icing' is likely 'Well, reading'. 'Read the instruction' should be 'understand the instructions'. 'Up before' is incorrect; 'before' alone suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× So I think is can good for our machines an get the machine not instr.

✓ So I think it can be good for our machines and helps us use the machines correctly.

'Is can good' is incorrect; should be 'it can be good'. 'An get the machine not instr' is unclear; likely intended to mean 'and helps us use the machines correctly'. Pronouns and verbs are corrected for clarity and grammar.