Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and coherent by avoiding pauses and repetitions. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about why you like the refrigerator.

예시: My favourite machine at home is definitely my refrigerator because it keeps my food fresh and cool. Moreover, I enjoy preparing meals for the week in advance, and the refrigerator helps me store them safely, which saves me a lot of time.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes and using linking words to make your response more natural and clear. Also, try to avoid fragmented sentences and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they clean more efficiently than doing it by hand. Furthermore, they are quick and convenient, which helps save time and effort.

제안: Try to speak more fluently without unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your reasons clearly and naturally.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to avoid confusion and prevent damaging it by using it incorrectly.

제안: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because it helps you use the machine properly and avoid breaking it. After all, you have spent time and money choosing the best machine.

× And I love making. A meal prep for the week.

✓ And I love making a meal prep for the week.

The sentence was incorrectly split into two fragments. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So. That's why I that's why I love my refrigerator.

✓ So that's why I love my refrigerator.

The sentence contained repetition and unnecessary periods, which disrupted the flow. Removing the repeated phrase and extra punctuation corrects the sentence structure.

× They are more efficient when cleaning than cleaning my by hunt and they.

✓ They are more efficient when cleaning than cleaning by hand, and they

The phrase 'cleaning my by hunt' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'cleaning by hand' to correctly express the comparison. Also, 'they' should be connected properly to the sentence.

× Are just quick. And convenient and. Doesn't consume us much time and effort.

✓ are just quick and convenient and don't consume much time and effort.

The sentence was fragmented and had subject-verb disagreement. Combining the fragments and correcting 'Doesn't' to 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'they' improves grammar.

× Sometimes break the machine because I don't know how to deal with it.

✓ Sometimes break the machine because I don't know how to use it.

The phrase 'deal with it' is vague and less appropriate here. 'Use it' is clearer and more suitable when referring to operating a machine.

× So that you don't break the machine that you spend your money and effort buying it.

✓ So that you don't break the machine that you spent your money and effort buying.

The sentence is awkward and has tense inconsistency. Changing 'spend' to past tense 'spent' and removing the unnecessary 'it' at the end improves clarity and correctness.

× The effort of far searching for the best machine in the world that.

✓ The effort of searching far and wide for the best machine in the world.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Reordering and completing the phrase makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.