Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it provides me with a lot of information for my studies. Moreover, it helps me stay connected with my friends and family through the internet.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please try to give a direct response with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us clean our clothes and floors quickly. For instance, washing machines save a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence more natural. Use linking words to explain why you read instructions.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how the machine works and prevents any mistakes.

제안: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clear and concise sentences with appropriate linking words to explain your opinion.

예시: In my opinion, reading instructions is very important because it tells us how the machine works. If we ignore the instructions, we might use the machine incorrectly and it may not work properly.

× My favorite machine in my home is.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my computer.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the object of the verb 'is'. To make it a complete sentence, the subject must be linked to a complement, here 'my computer'. This correction completes the sentence structure.

× My computer is.

✓ My computer is my favorite machine.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement. It should specify what 'My computer is' to be meaningful. The correction completes the sentence by stating it is the favorite machine.

× It provides me a lot of information regarding my.

✓ It provides me a lot of information regarding my studies.

The sentence ends abruptly without completing the object of the preposition 'regarding'. Adding 'studies' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Studies and also given leave from the.

✓ It helps me with my studies and also gives me leave from other tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb agreement. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper subject and verb usage.

× In my opinion, they are important because it is washing machines are used for cleaning.

✓ In my opinion, washing machines are important because they are used for cleaning.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it is' and mixes singular and plural pronouns. The correction removes 'it is' and uses 'they' to correctly refer to 'washing machines'.

× Node switch arms has three for us.

✓ Washing machines have three functions for us.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correction assumes the intended meaning and provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× Yes, I read the instructions before using the machine to get the brief information about the machines and how will machine work.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using the machine to get brief information about the machine and how it works.

The phrase 'how will machine work' is incorrect in word order and tense. The correct form is 'how it works' in present simple tense to describe general facts.

× In my opinion is reading instructions are is very important because it keeps the details about how the machine is a going to work and if we don't want it and if we don't really see instruction so we may mess up with the functioning of the machine and don't get the proper outcome.

✓ In my opinion, reading instructions is very important because it provides details about how the machine is going to work, and if we don't read the instructions, we may mess up the functioning of the machine and not get the proper outcome.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun errors, verb form errors, and awkward phrasing. The correction clarifies pronoun references, corrects verb forms, and improves sentence flow for clarity.