Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, which makes it difficult to understand. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, using complete sentences and relevant vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is coherent.

예시: My favorite machine at home is my cell phone because I use it everywhere to stay connected and for entertainment, such as watching movies.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure and relevant vocabulary. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear opinion and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort, especially for busy people. However, some people may prefer doing chores manually due to personal habits or cultural reasons.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to give a direct and coherent response, explaining when you read instructions and when you don't, using appropriate linking words and vocabulary.

예시: I usually don't read instructions if the machine is easy to use. But if it's complicated, I read the manual carefully to avoid mistakes.

제안: Your answer has some good points but is not clearly expressed. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your opinion clear and logical. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary will improve your answer.

예시: I think it is important to read instructions if you are not familiar with the machine. Otherwise, you might use it incorrectly, which can be dangerous.

× My favorite messing in my home is my cell phone.

✓ My favorite thing in my home is my cell phone.

The word 'messing' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'thing' to refer to an object. Using the correct noun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I use a bridge.

✓ I use it regularly.

The sentence 'I use a bridge' is unclear and likely a misstatement. Replacing it with 'I use it regularly' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Where I'm.

✓ Where I am.

The phrase 'Where I'm.' is incomplete and incorrect. Expanding it to 'Where I am.' completes the sentence and corrects the structure.

× Keep it every.

✓ I keep it with me all the time.

'Keep it every.' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× Where an I am.

✓ Where I am.

'Where an I am.' contains an unnecessary article 'an'. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× I was in this movies for my entertainment.

✓ I watch movies on it for my entertainment.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies that the student watches movies on the cell phone for entertainment.

× For me, not really it's depend on people are raise people is offered by love in our country.

✓ For me, not really; it depends on how people are raised and what is offered in our country.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and unclear phrasing. Using 'it depends' correctly and clarifying the sentence improves grammar and meaning.

× No one is offered for this kind of message so they.

✓ No one is offered this kind of machine, so they...

The pronoun 'they' is used without a clear antecedent, and 'message' is likely a typo for 'machine'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Do with their had an.

✓ They do with their hands.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× Also it's feel like.

✓ Also, it feels like that.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject-verb agreement. The correction completes the sentence and corrects the verb form.

× No. No sometime no mirzam them al do if I am I'm trying to.

✓ No. Sometimes I don't read them if I'm trying to figure something out.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect modal verb usage. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses modal verbs properly.

× Figure out milk, but sometime it's very easy to grow.

✓ Figure it out, but sometimes it's very easy to use.

The original sentence contains nonsensical phrases like 'milk' and 'grow'. The correction replaces them with appropriate words to make sense.

× No need instructions.

✓ No need for instructions.

The phrase lacks the preposition 'for' which is necessary after 'need' in this context.

× To use my SIM.

✓ To use my SIM card.

The phrase is incomplete; adding 'card' completes the noun phrase.

× Merge sometime it difficult to.

✓ Sometimes it is difficult to use.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Mostly not if someone already knows.

✓ Mostly not, if someone already knows how to use it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'how to use it' completes the thought and improves grammar.

× Do about this Mason is no need to raid, but if not, they absolutely need to.

✓ To do with this machine, there is no need to read instructions, but if not, they absolutely need to.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies the subject and object and corrects pronoun use.

× Read if you don't know how to use its make us danger.

✓ You should read them if you don't know how to use it; otherwise, it can be dangerous.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and lacks clarity. The correction uses 'should' appropriately and clarifies the warning.