Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并避免重复和不必要的细节。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持你的观点。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I usually put various clothes like socks and sweaters into it and wait for the cycle to finish.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更流畅，同时具体说明这些机器如何帮助你节省时间。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help me save time. As a result, I can relax more and focus on other activities.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子表达你的观点，并说明你如何通过观察学习使用机器。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions. Instead, I learn by looking at the buttons and trying to use the machine, which helps me understand how it works.

제안: 回答中断句不自然，语法错误较多。建议用连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明为什么你认为不需要详细阅读说明书。

예시: No, I don't think it's very important to read the instructions because most machines nowadays are user-friendly. I can usually understand how to use them by looking at the labels on the machine.

× Because I can do my laundry with this machine without washing by hand.

✓ I can do my laundry with this machine without washing by hand.

句子不能以连词Because开头，导致句子结构不完整。应将其与前句合并或改为完整句。

× I always put some clothes for some socks to some sweaters in this machine and I will wait.

✓ I always put some clothes, socks, and sweaters in this machine and then wait.

介词使用错误，'put ... for ... to ... in'结构不正确，应直接用'put ... in'表示放入机器中。

× And made my time more vacant.

✓ It makes my time more free.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且'vacant'用法不当，应使用形容词'free'表达时间空闲。

× And make my time more relaxed and relieved.

✓ It makes my time more relaxed and relieved.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应加上主语'It'。

× Because I can learning by doing to look at these instructions, these buttons on the machine so that I can you how to use it and make it make advantage of it.

✓ Because I can learn by doing, looking at these instructions and the buttons on the machine so that I can know how to use it and make good use of it.

'can learning'错误，情态动词后应接动词原形；句子结构混乱，需调整动词形式和表达方式。

× No, I don't think so, because.

✓ No, I don't think so.

句子以because结尾，导致不完整，应去掉because或补充完整内容。

× I can look at these. Instructions on the surface of the machine so that I can use it easily.

✓ I can look at the instructions on the surface of the machine so that I can use it easily.

句中'look at these. Instructions'断句错误，应连写为'look at the instructions'，且冠词使用需正确。